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Black Birds Flying At Walmart

Black Birds Flying at Wal-Mart I see them gather, flock on flock, At 7:30am sharp, they start to squawk and talk. The sun peeks up, the horizon glows, The air alive with cackles and crows. Their feathers bristle, sharp and black, They soar and dip, they dart fourth and back. Their eyes, a yellow shining disc, Reflect the light, a golden whisk. The parking lot, their chosen stage, They flutter, and fly in trees they engage. Heads turn left and then to right, When they fly the sky turns a speckled night. They peck at crumbs, on scraps they dine, Their steps in rhythm, a sequenced line. Among the cars, they dance and sway, When humans enter their territory they fly away. From tree to light poles they take their flight, Under the Walmart’s neon light. Upward they rise to poles they glide, On top of Walmart’s walls they nest and subside. On the back of the wind, they wheel, and turn, For insects, food, their hunger burns. The Black Birds gather on shopping carts. Masses of Black Birds flying at Wal-Mart.

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Date: 5/24/2025 4:46:00 PM
So many crumbs are left behind at Walmart. A smorgasbord for black birds. :) And they don't complain. Such a cute and clever write. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Antuan. :) Brandy
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Antuan Simmons
Date: 5/24/2025 10:54:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem Brandy! I always wanted to do a poem about Black Birds and Walmart!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/24/2025 4:51:00 PM
:) back
Date: 5/24/2025 4:32:00 PM
You'd think their tastes would be more upscale. Hey welcome to PS!
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Antuan Simmons
Date: 5/24/2025 10:54:00 PM
Thanks Tom! Good to be hear!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/24/2025 4:38:00 PM
:)

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