Black Beauty

Black Beauty, my dear horse, I have for you
a place of leisure where no more you’ll toil.
A sugar cube I’ll give you – maybe two.
You’ll paw the ground for me because I’ll spoil
you like you so deserve! I’ve plenty of
nice apple slices, carrots, cubes of hay
and even some bananas, for my love
for you is boundless. In a field you’ll play.
Then if you get too hot, I’ll lead you to
cool water where we’ll splash! Then down a lane
I’ll ride you home, and so much more I’ll do:
I’ll scratch your withers, stroke and braid your mane!
Though "out to pasture," that's an awesome phase!
Black Beauty, to your heart’s content, you’ll graze.

Submitted for Robert James Liguori's A Notable Horse Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Magnet Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 10:50 PM
As a horse lover, your sentiments and joy I have experienced, nice ode to a beautiful creature.
Soni Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Lovely poem depicting a beautiful bond between two lifelong friends. Congratulations,Rashi
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Horses deserve to roam free in a pasture as they need to exercise. I would spoil my horse too if I was lucky enough to have one. Loved this Andrea. Congratulations on your win. xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations on placing in my contest, Andrea, thanks for entering.
Ball Avatar
March 31, 2020 at 9:33 AM
This reminds me of my Genesis. He will live forever in my heart. I think of him every day and will never stop missing him. God Bless, JB
Laurie Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 9:56 PM
Hello Andrea … such devotion between two lifelong friends and written so beautifully Andrea - thank you - Lindsay
Brewer Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:36 AM
I meant ‘love’ sonnet.
Brewer Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 11:35 AM
A perfect response to Michelle’s challenge. A touching personal live sonnet.
May Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Wonderful write Andrea..
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Very poetic write, Andrea, great imagery a loving horse would really be spoiled. Good luck in the contest, should place very high.
La France Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Andrea, this is lovely, I love horses and this touched my heart, no matter what this is a winner for me and a FAV _Constance
Y. Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Hi Andrea, You have penned a lovely Sonnett for contest theme. I could just picture the majestic horse grazing in a field. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gondolf Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:44 PM
I enjoyed your lovely sonnet, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Hope you and your family are staying safe. John
Watt Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:27 PM
A lovely new sonnet from the Sonneteer's prolific pen! Always enjoy your enjambments, but they seem to be in full force for this write. Someday soon, I hope to be out to pasture, grazing to my heart's content! Love this, best wishes in Michelle's contest, friend!
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Lovely sonnet Andrea, who wasn't charmed by black beauty. Good luck Tom
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, I read the abbreviated version of it in my ESL students' book several years ago. The horses were treated miserably in those days before animal rights. The author of that classic novel helped society to know the horses' plight.
Hawkens Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Thank you for the wonderful lines, Andrea. This was a pleasure to read.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 3:14 PM
Sounds like mother's love--he will certainly reciprocate. Enjoyed the tender verses, Andrea.
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March 28, 2020 at 3:01 PM
I think it is an elevated expression of humanity to desire paradisiacal wonderment for creatures on par with what we espouse for ourselves. Besides, it seems to me that in many cases, they are the worthier and nobler creation. Thanks for your lovely, sober tribute.
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Don't think you spoil Black Beauty do you? Best wishes in the contest Andrea...
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