Constance La France Poet Free verse

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Black and White

 
black and
white keys
play our
song of 
sweet love
in my
dream, oh
the pain
of lost 
love hurts, 
black and
white keys
I miss
you, oh
dark death
I thought
we could
grow old
as one,
oh pain, 
black death
blank white
my life
since you
left me

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March 6, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/Black and White
Copyright Protected, ID 16-764-724-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspiration, Image #1, Piano Keys

For the contest, United Colors: Black and White
(25 lines, 2 words per line (50 word 1 syllable words)
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 11:18 AM Broken. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA Constance La France March 15, 2016 at 2:51 PM Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome ~

Daver Austin March 11, 2016 at 4:50 PM A sad tune, B.W. I hope you can find a way to play Ich Leiba dich. I don't know German, just guessing. Anywho, luck in the contest. daver Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 5:08 PM Dave, thanks so much for visiting my poem, and I happily got 2nd place in the contest !

Joanna Daniel March 11, 2016 at 6:43 AM Great write:) congratulations on your brilliant win:) Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 6:22 PM Jo, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and the brilliant !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 11, 2016 at 2:35 AM Brilliant take Broken .. congrats on great win with these lovely words.. Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 6:35 PM Upma, thanks for the brilliant, the congrats and the lovely !

Anindya Mohan Tagore March 10, 2016 at 9:37 PM Wonderful use of black & white in our life. Congrats Constance... Hugs, Bobby Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 6:46 PM Bobby, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats and hugs !

Laura Leiser March 10, 2016 at 7:14 PM Congrats on your win, Constance :) Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 7:48 PM Laura, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !

Vladislav Raven March 10, 2016 at 5:14 PM Hi Constance, Congratulations an a well deserved high placing for this emotional piece. Eyes sparkle with tears as one follows the words from beginning to end. Once more your words do stir the heart Constance. There pain sings and the emotions are stirred and tears lift the heart to the stars. An excellent write my friend. A seven and into my faves....MIKE. Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 5:45 PM Mike, thanks for the congratulations and the excellent, the seven and the fav and the lovely comment, appreciate so much ~

Eve Roper March 10, 2016 at 5:13 PM Back to congratulate you on your win :) !!Hugs Eve Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 5:59 PM Eve, thanks so much for the congrats and the hugs !

Janice Canerdy March 10, 2016 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 6:03 PM Janice, thank you so much for the congratulations !

Connie Marcum Wong March 10, 2016 at 1:13 PM Your emotional piece well deserves top honors Constance. Big congratulations dear lady! Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 6:16 PM Connie, thank you for the congratulations and the nice comment !

Suzanne Delaney March 10, 2016 at 11:24 AM Congratulations. Your lost love plays a haunting tune.. Hugs, Suz Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 6:23 PM Suzanne, thank you for the congratulations and the hugs !

Sarita Milliner March 10, 2016 at 11:14 AM Congratulations on your placement Broken Wings!! Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 11:16 AM Sarita, thanks so much for visiting with the congratulations !

Winged Warrior March 10, 2016 at 9:49 AM Another win...congrats Wings...^WW^ Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 10:51 AM Winged, thanks for the congrats !

Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 9:17 AM Congrats on your placement BW...-luloo*smiles* Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 10:52 AM Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats and smiles !

Paul Callus March 10, 2016 at 8:51 AM Lovely take on black & white piano keys, Constance; the sad streak that runs through it makes it a worthy winner. Congratulations! // paul Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 10:52 AM Paul, thanks so much for the lovely, the compliments and the congratulations ~

Eve Roper March 8, 2016 at 2:17 PM Exquisite write, Broken Wing, good luck in the contest a7!!!!! Constance La France March 8, 2016 at 7:55 PM Eve, thanks for visiting with the exquisite, I love that word and the 7 !

James Inman March 8, 2016 at 10:48 AM Very, very nice. Follows the form beautifully. I really like this, BW. Constance La France March 8, 2016 at 12:11 PM James, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful. ..

David Aaron March 8, 2016 at 1:20 AM Such a beautiful blend of melancholy and longing. Constance La France March 8, 2016 at 7:33 AM David, thanks so much for visiting with the beautiful !

Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 9:47 PM Life plays a different tune at times . Misery has taught us defiant endurance...my thoughts are with you, broken wings...I rememeber, I got a placement in one of your contests..the angel cries at night...I fondly remember. ps I have read your poems and they are breathtaking... Constance La France March 8, 2016 at 7:47 AM Red, thanks for visiting my poem with that beautiful comment, it truly touched my heart ~

Winged Warrior March 7, 2016 at 6:51 PM Darkly done great BW...(:^WW^:) Constance La France March 7, 2016 at 8:11 PM WW, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !

Connie Marcum Wong March 7, 2016 at 8:42 AM A wonderful moving poem for the contest Constance. This was a hard one I thought. Good luck my friend! Constance La France March 7, 2016 at 6:19 PM Connie, thanks for visiting with the wonderful !

John Lawless March 6, 2016 at 10:03 PM BW, this one really reads smoothly and drives the starkness of the difference to heart. Constance La France March 6, 2016 at 10:14 PM John, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment ...