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Black, cold, still water Only moonlight reflections Invites into night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/14/2009 6:00:00 PM
I like very much, meminds my of oil.
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Date: 11/30/2009 4:05:00 PM
Very pretty
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Date: 11/27/2009 6:08:00 PM
nice one, good description
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Date: 11/27/2009 9:54:00 AM
Very nice Haiku Sara, inviting doorway to night >> James
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Date: 11/27/2009 4:59:00 AM
A lovely scene.. created by your lovely pen... enjoyed this haiku much... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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