Black

At the beginning, in the cradle,
all were black and comely.
Great civilization evolved to flourish
and build magnificent monuments
to humanity.
The world of black faces
left traces around the globe
of their art and government.
Over millennia an invasion
of fair-skinned parasites
systematically rewrote history
to exclude these ancestors.
Pushed from the Nile to ever-shrinking
lands unable to sustain the Ancients,
their sons and daughters now starve.

Packages thrown from planes
like bones to dogs
contain nutritionless gruel
or plastic containers of water
that leech chemicals.
Gaunt faces appear in
channel-changed t.v. ads
as the genocide goes on.

Herein these lines lies impotent rage,
a caricature of humanity,
an aching soul who can only write
and write and write words
which make no difference
to a child's belly tonight.


~~~~~~~~~~~~  for the Sami Al-Khalili contest  ~~~~~~~~~~~~

NOTE:  "The Destruction of Black Civilization:  Great Issues of Race
            from 4500 B.C. to 2000 A.D" written by Chancellor Williams 
            is truly an eye-opening read !!
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Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sami's contest Sue. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on this well written piece, Sue....so deserving for being among the winning poems, a sad subject, but needing to be heard! Excellent entry! ~ love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Congrats on your success in Sami's contest Sue.Rgds Brian
Mckenzie Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 5:44 PM
Dear sue such a well done poem on part of black race! Thank you for your help on my poem I think I will enter it! Love Laura good luck in the contest!
Johnson Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Well written Sue and I would like to read this eye opener bit of history. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for reading me. Love, joyce
Guzzi Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Please tell more about the aborigines belief system on the blog or to me at soup mail. Light & Love
 Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 5:11 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a powerful way. Good luck in the contest--I predict seeing this in the winners circle. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 5:02 PM
Wow Sami sure stirred up a big pot of whoop arse LOL perhaps you've read mine, The Body and the Blood. Your verse tells a truth white folk do not wish to hear. The cradle of civilization held dark skinned people! So, in all likelyhood "J" was not lilly white. Big hugs to you and thanks for the nice feed back. Sorry we got started off on the wrong foot. I'm still trying to get it out of my mouth. (pout) Light & Love
Strand Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Thank for your welcome commentoday Sue.Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Terrific poem Sue, best of luck in Sami's contest>>James
Strand Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 12:30 AM
Best wishes with this one Sue.Rgds Brian Thank you for your welcome comments today
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