Black- Powdered Bullets

On a muddy  moonless avenue
    his drooped silhouette tugs
    while the hollow niche of despair growls--
    permeating a former soldier's anthem.
All dawn moaning, all night lamenting
    with lost faith buried under clay--
    robed in a cloth of delirium from a warfare furious,
    blistered hands marking a smoked-alloyed existence.
                       
Quarreling with ghosts, his eyes quiver
    as black powder of bullets explodes
    unto pools of flushed hallucinations...
    unresolved wounds leading him into oblivion.


For Anthony Slausen: Black Powder Contest
11/13/2018





    
 
    

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/26/2018 12:23:00 AM
Reading your outstanding poem on the heels of Veteran’s Day is very meaningful to me, Nette. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/23/2018 7:17:00 PM
Wonderful write,Nette, love the poem. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/23/2018 6:33:00 AM
Very well penned, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/15/2018 5:11:00 PM
You are on a winning streak and your muse is standing tall and proud. Go for the trophy Nette.
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Date: 11/15/2018 2:53:00 PM
Your wonderful poem gives a glimpse into the horrors of war as if you were immersed in the battle with a birds eye view. Brilliantly written Nette! : )
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Date: 11/14/2018 7:54:00 AM
There are those times that Trump growls, And often thinks he is like wise old owls; Bowels not move, Or will improve; Tries to wipe off scowls with his towels.
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Date: 11/13/2018 12:39:00 PM
Wow...the talk of a true solider...You captured a scene...All the best nette
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Date: 11/13/2018 10:09:00 AM
A former soldier’s personal battle with the inner demon of his wartime experience is expressed with powerful poignancy, Nette. Gorgeous imagery of tortured emotions. Best for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2018 3:59:00 PM
Nicely written! “Quarreling with ghosts” I can’t imagine the horrors of war.
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:46:00 PM
Totally engrossed in this tragic melange of emotions so elegantly expressed by your mesmerizing poem, Nette! Such emotive poetry truth driven undaunted. Great write! Love and joy always.
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:29:00 PM
The mental scars of battle are hard to supress. Many never escape the torment afterwards. Tom.
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Date: 11/12/2018 11:50:00 AM
You wrote so passionately here a tale of war that affected so many lives..intensity of your write is greatly felt, nette. Best for a win.
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