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Soon winter time will come
                                         
The ice and snow will not wait for you or cages
           
Cold and dumb.
Snow white and bright
                                                 
Fun to play in for all ages
                                             
Delight.
                                                        
Fast sled
                                                                     
I want rages
             
Lead.
Soon winter time will come
                                         
Fun to play in for all ages
                                           
Lead.
Date Written 9/8/2020
3 Place Let's Minichu on Bizarre Contest Judged: 9/30/2020 Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 9/30/2020 5:56:00 AM
Nice Paula. Congrats on the win! Linda
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day...............
Date: 9/30/2020 3:41:00 AM
Paula, thanx for participating. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day.............
Date: 9/14/2020 11:40:00 AM
We here in the burning Northwest cannot wait for winter. Excellent pen. Chantelle hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. It has been very hot here. Hope you are OK. Enjoy your day with a hug......
Date: 9/9/2020 10:29:00 AM
Great write on the fun of winter! Best wishes for the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day.............
Date: 9/9/2020 12:09:00 AM
I still look forward to enjoy some time playing in the snow, Paula! Here in Malta we never get any snow, and the only time I saw and touched it in real life was when I went up high mountains. Enjoyed this lovely poem....regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2020 8:31:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Glad you got to see/touch the snow. Everyone should do it once in a life time. Enjoy your day.............
Date: 9/8/2020 5:40:00 PM
oh I do remember those days. Can't believe I enjoyed being in the snow and cold. It truly was quite bizarre, looking back on it as an adult!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. It is fun for the kids. Guess we grow up and it is then work. Enjoy your day.............