Bizarre

Grandson’s hindu wedding,
English grandma wore an Indian silk saree,
Not kidding!

Jewels in gold,
Grandma looked a rajkumari*,
of old!

Say chaps
“Look savoury“
claps!

Grandson’s hindu wedding,
Grandma looked a rajkumari,
Claps!

*rajkumari - princess
Minichu Bizarre poetry contest
Mohan Chutani

Written 02/09/2020

Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Date: 9/30/2020 5:48:00 AM
English grandma in a silk saree-wonderful! Congrats on the win Krish! Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/30/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Linda! They do look extraordinary!! not bizarre!
Date: 9/30/2020 3:57:00 AM
Krish, being Indian, I could relate to it. thanx for participating. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/30/2020 4:33:00 AM
Thanks Mohan. Happy I could muster something for the competition. Your format is working well!
Date: 9/2/2020 3:21:00 PM
My old boss was a Hindu and he invited me to his daughters wedding it was a memorable occasion, you brought back happy memories Krish. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/2/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thanks Tom! The colourful Indian weddings are well known! Expensive as well! I am sure you had a great time!
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