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Grandson’s hindu wedding, English grandma wore an Indian silk saree, Not kidding! Jewels in gold, Grandma looked a rajkumari*, of old! Say chaps “Look savoury“ claps! Grandson’s hindu wedding, Grandma looked a rajkumari, Claps! *rajkumari - princess Minichu Bizarre poetry contest Mohan Chutani Written 02/09/2020 Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/30/2020 5:48:00 AM

English grandma in a silk saree-wonderful! Congrats on the win Krish! Linda

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/30/2020 6:13:00 AM

Thank you Linda! They do look extraordinary!! not bizarre!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/30/2020 3:57:00 AM

Krish, being Indian, I could relate to it. thanx for participating. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/30/2020 4:33:00 AM

Thanks Mohan. Happy I could muster something for the competition. Your format is working well!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/2/2020 3:21:00 PM

My old boss was a Hindu and he invited me to his daughters wedding it was a memorable occasion, you brought back happy memories Krish. Tom

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/2/2020 10:04:00 PM

Thanks Tom! The colourful Indian weddings are well known! Expensive as well! I am sure you had a great time!