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Bittersweet This Yearning

Mom’s garden blushed with flowers on our lawn Recalling youth’s zest of fancy-free tread: I stand here by an old lamppost , in thought And imagine dewed clusters overhead. How I loved jasmines fondled by the breeze, Where treetops glow with moonlit autumn skies That forever mark a part of charm in me… Oh, sweet are memories from joyful eyes. Although walls have crumbled under time’s hand Those blooms still grace remains of long ago; As every scent, petal fills my yearning heart When I see jasmines through all seasons’ flow. 9/4/2017 Bittersweet Contest for Kevin Shaw

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Date: 10/3/2017 6:44:00 PM
Yes scents do stir some powerful memories at times. Wonderful poetry, nette:)
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:00:00 PM
I am so happy to see this a top winner Nette. Congratulations on you wonderful third placement! I am really loving Kevin's choices. : )
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:31:00 PM
A beautiful soulfully bittersweet write Nette. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:46:00 PM
Hey, Nette, back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:11:00 PM
I have two jasmine plants growing Nette. Their perfume is unmistakable. How true we connect certain smells with certain memories. Congratulations on your placement this evening.
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Date: 9/8/2017 3:10:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery you paint for us Nette. I am enamored by your poetry tonight. "Oh, sweet are memories from joyful eyes."...love that line! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:39:00 AM
- A beautiful fragrant poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 8:51:00 AM
A very sweet entry my friend...no bitterness here...best of luck nette...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/5/2017 4:52:00 AM
I can visualize your incredible write my friend, and it is a beautiful garden, full of your mom's wondrous Jasmines...all flowing through the breeze and enlightening your eyes, as much as this poem have enlightened my senses! I truly have enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning! You have delighted me by your incredible skill at writing this amazing piece, thank you for delivering this image to my mind, though I do know it is bittersweet, but the good memory lives on! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/5/2017 2:35:00 AM
For the past two nights I have slept with a sprig of Jasmine scenting my room. I love this flowering bush too. This is a very lovely entry Nette. ; )
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Date: 9/4/2017 9:48:00 PM
Beautiful , Nette, good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/4/2017 4:21:00 PM
Indeed, we will always cherish that part of young life which made us feel so precious. Eloquent in its mellow yearning!
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Date: 9/4/2017 1:25:00 PM
Hi Nette, This is so lovely and poetic. The scene you created is captivating. You can feel the "bitter sweetness " within this well written write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/4/2017 1:18:00 PM
This is beautiful Nette and perfect for the bittersweet contest. Good luck :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 12:20:00 PM
truly bittersweet thoughts that haunt...
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Date: 9/4/2017 12:20:00 PM
A lovely scene depicted in your usual artful words--well done nette! Good luck for the contest.
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Date: 9/4/2017 11:12:00 AM
wow! got me caught up there for a brief moment; i like that i was lost in romantic thoughts, a little yearning for some flowers in bloom. nice!
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Date: 9/4/2017 11:06:00 AM
Gardens are so beautiful, but moms garden, even more so!!!!! So sweet!
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