Bittersweet This Yearning

Mom’s garden  blushed with flowers on our lawn
Recalling youth’s  zest of fancy-free tread:
I stand  here by an old lamppost , in thought
And imagine dewed clusters overhead.

How I  loved jasmines fondled by the breeze,
Where treetops glow with moonlit autumn skies
That forever mark a part of charm in me…
Oh, sweet  are memories from joyful eyes.

Although walls have crumbled under time’s hand
Those blooms still grace remains of long ago;
As  every scent,  petal   fills my yearning heart
When I see jasmines through all seasons’ flow.


9/4/2017
Bittersweet Contest for Kevin Shaw
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Turner Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:44 PM
Yes scents do stir some powerful memories at times. Wonderful poetry, nette:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:00 PM
I am so happy to see this a top winner Nette. Congratulations on you wonderful third placement! I am really loving Kevin's choices. : )
Ashley Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:31 PM
A beautiful soulfully bittersweet write Nette. Congratulations on your win! :)
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Hey, Nette, back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Murray Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:11 PM
I have two jasmine plants growing Nette. Their perfume is unmistakable. How true we connect certain smells with certain memories. Congratulations on your placement this evening.
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September 8, 2017 at 3:10 AM
Such beautiful imagery you paint for us Nette. I am enamored by your poetry tonight. "Oh, sweet are memories from joyful eyes."...love that line! Always, Laura
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September 6, 2017 at 2:39 AM
- A beautiful fragrant poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:51 AM
A very sweet entry my friend...no bitterness here...best of luck nette...god bless...^WW^
Sivey Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:52 AM
I can visualize your incredible write my friend, and it is a beautiful garden, full of your mom's wondrous Jasmines...all flowing through the breeze and enlightening your eyes, as much as this poem have enlightened my senses! I truly have enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning! You have delighted me by your incredible skill at writing this amazing piece, thank you for delivering this image to my mind, though I do know it is bittersweet, but the good memory lives on! Great Work!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 2:35 AM
For the past two nights I have slept with a sprig of Jasmine scenting my room. I love this flowering bush too. This is a very lovely entry Nette. ; )
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Beautiful , Nette, good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Mara Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Indeed, we will always cherish that part of young life which made us feel so precious. Eloquent in its mellow yearning!
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Hi Nette, This is so lovely and poetic. The scene you created is captivating. You can feel the "bitter sweetness " within this well written write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:18 PM
This is beautiful Nette and perfect for the bittersweet contest. Good luck :)
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:20 PM
A lovely scene depicted in your usual artful words--well done nette! Good luck for the contest.
Parker Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 12:20 PM
truly bittersweet thoughts that haunt...
Leong Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:12 AM
wow! got me caught up there for a brief moment; i like that i was lost in romantic thoughts, a little yearning for some flowers in bloom. nice!
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Gardens are so beautiful, but moms garden, even more so!!!!! So sweet!
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