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Bittersweet Reunion - Emotive Write

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I sat and watched the drama unfold on the TV Wondered what I’d do if it had happened to me ... Just seventeen and pregnant, when her boyfriend is killed Frances is so heartbroken and many tears are spilled She places an ad for someone to adopt her son Then interviews couples to choose the right one After many years her son tries to trace his birth mum He discovered she’d died and he looked terribly glum But he finds a half brother; he lived one mile away! Their reunion on TV was such a special day Sadly within a few weeks one of the brothers died I read it in the newspaper; then I sat and cried Bittersweet Contest Sponsored by Kevin Shaw A true story based on a TV programme called 'Long Lost Family' and also a newspaper article I found on the internet http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/niece-man-who-died-weeks-11044570 09-03-17

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2017 6:52:00 PM

oh my, that IS so sad and just what bittersweet means. YOu should do very well with this story, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2017 3:55:00 PM

It's 100% true Andrea it was so sad to see the tv programme then learn one of the brothers was found dead in his house:-( I hope Kevin likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 9/4/2017 5:53:00 AM

Great couplets Jan, your poem makes me think how lucky I am, a loving family and healthy, well written, GL in contest. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2017 12:41:00 PM

You can't ask for more than that especially your health:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2017 1:36:00 AM

- A tragic story, Jan - Heartbreaking - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2017 2:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/3/2017 5:40:00 PM

Roy Orbison had bad luck or loss in his life. Some people are just cursed with bad luck

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/3/2017 6:19:00 PM

Fame . Rich Luck knows no crosses boundaries

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:54:00 PM

I've just had a peek at his bio Christopher - what tragedy he had in his life:-( hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/3/2017 5:38:00 PM

You captured the theme well in this sad story Jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:50:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

James Swartz

Date: 9/3/2017 5:33:00 PM

Great poem Jan. Yours is definitely bittersweet as well. It is hard to limit it to twelve lines but you have done it perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:49:00 PM

Thanks James i found it a real challenge:-0 hugs jan xx

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/3/2017 5:09:00 PM

Oh what a bittersweet story it as ,Jan. I loved how you put ém on a poem. :O) 'Grats!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Aiyah it was quite a challenge to write the story in just 12 lines. I hope Kevin likes my poem:-) hugs jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/3/2017 4:10:00 PM

Hi Jan , so so sad my friend ::))) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 4:28:00 PM

Thanks Niall the tv programme can be so sad and it was a challenge to write the story in a poem of just 12 lines:-( hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/3/2017 3:57:00 PM

that is a very sad story, jan, and you've told it very well here...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Ilene it was heartbreaking to see the story on television and then to find he had died so suddenly after meeting his half brother:-( hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 9/3/2017 1:20:00 PM

Yes, this is a sad story, Jan. Best to you in the contest. Thanks for the stop by. Spent Summer is one of my better lyrics about New England seasons. It's included in my hopefully published book "Once Upon a New England Boy." Many thanks. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 3:38:00 PM

oh wow Maurice that is wonderful news about your book I am delighted for you, your poem was wonderful!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White

Date: 9/3/2017 12:32:00 PM

Sad story, Jan... I hope it does well in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 12:50:00 PM

Thanks Darren I hope Kevin likes it but as long as I am creative I don't worry about placing in contests especially the premiere ones where there are so few places:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2017 11:11:00 AM

True stories can be as sad as fiction sometimes--good depiction, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 11:14:00 AM

Thanks Vijay this sad sad story touched me so deeply:-( hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 9/3/2017 10:08:00 AM

All those years spent without knowing they lived so close together was sorrowful...but it would've been even more sad if they'd not had those few weeks together. Your emotions are displayed through your soft heart, Jan. ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:15:00 AM

Watching the programmes are so sad Lin, they try to trace relatives for 2 people in every episode and the stories of why they lost contact with their children is quite heartbreaking. Without the contest prompt I would never have written the story and it was a challenge to condense it into just 12 lines:-( hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 9/3/2017 9:48:00 AM

So sad, Jan. Strange how life's threads run. // Barry.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:13:00 AM

The important thing was he found his half brother and they were reunited before tragedy struck again:-(I was in tears watching the TV programme and when i found he has passed away it made me very sad indeed:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/3/2017 9:20:00 AM

That is such a sad story Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2017 10:11:00 AM

Its a tragic story:-( hugs jan xx