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Bitter-Sweet Memory

Fantasy challenge
Undocumented hand sport
Emissions exhaust!!!
Using balls and club
Causing eruption in space.
Bringing forth sweet cream!!

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Tim Ryerson

February 12, 2010 at 5:38 PM

I think I get it!!...Or do I just have a dirty mind too?...Well done, Marty! (What was the final score?) - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

February 12, 2010 at 12:25 PM

Hmmm, is it just me with a dirty mind here . YOu seem to have described a "sport" I know of which is very famous in the world. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 11, 2010 at 7:06 PM

Sounds like Wiffle Ball dynamics ... but cannot imagine them bringing forth sweet cream... am I missing something here? whose fantasy is this? .. I just luv guessing games... enjoyed.. smile ... "Sweetheart" P.S. throw in some chocolates and flowers .. now there's a fantasy!