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Bittersweet Memories

Nostalgia Endearing, wistful Recalling, longing, reflecting, Remembering a cherished time Beloved Grief Sorrowful, tragic Mourning, desiring, paining Torpid from heart’s despair Loss for Dr. Ram's Cinquain Poetry Contest, 12/13/14

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Date: 1/2/2015 11:15:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Rhonda, for your nice win! So many emotional words in such a small setting..very powerful! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:03:00 PM
yours was so well crafted. congrats for your win in this new year, sweet rhonda!
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:35:00 AM
Very touching write Rhonda - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:19:00 AM
Well done Rhonda! This is a touching Cinquain with a very fitting title. Congratulations on your high placing! All the bset for 2015. // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:06:00 AM
A good work, congrats on the win Rhonda...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:01:00 AM
Hi Rhonda.. Congrats on your wonderful 3rd place win!! I hope this coming year of 2015 is your very best ever!
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Date: 1/1/2015 9:35:00 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Rhonda
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Date: 12/15/2014 12:17:00 AM
I was wondering how the heck one could do a modern cinquain with the theme of longing but you showed us how with this set. WELL done, rhonda. sure to place high with Dr. Ram!!
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:23:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..You make the competetion very hard..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:14:00 AM
good luck in contest Rhonda, with this magical gem...
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Date: 12/13/2014 11:49:00 PM
:) Lovely, my dear. I am well acquainted with nostalgia and loss. You made this go so smoothly from one concept to the other. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for your visit.
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Date: 12/13/2014 11:43:00 PM
oh, Rhonda, bittersweet indeed!each word counts it all made this cinquan beautiful!
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:26:00 PM
A nice pare of Cinquain poetry Rhonda. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/13/2014 6:56:00 PM
This is excellent Rhonda,wishing you luck in the contest...huggs
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Date: 12/13/2014 6:28:00 PM
well done Rhonda great write , good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:41:00 PM
Awesome, had to look up the word torpid -- nice!! A winner of a poem.
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:15:00 PM
powerful write here, Rhonda - one I can certainly relate to
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Date: 12/13/2014 3:53:00 PM
- Both touching and beautiful, Rhonda - Well done and good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend - (see you again before Christmas) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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