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Bittersweet Love

Do you want to bet
Fate is the reason we met?
I reveal my inner soul
My heart is still whole
I want everything 
Including a ring

Your heart and your love
You have nothing to be afraid of
Love is supposed to be
Something that's given for free
It can't be beat 
And will never be bittersweet

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Deneen White

November 8, 2008 at 12:46 PM

such a write of passion filled within, and a longing for something more, in time all things are possible, take care D-ncye

Jacob Wölf

November 4, 2008 at 4:12 PM

um... i like the poem but im not sure how its a ABC poem............

Sharon Winter

November 4, 2008 at 3:29 PM

That Michael is something else isn't he. Extremely thoughtful, so very caring and sweet. I happen to agree with him. There is someone out there meant for you, the right one, and in time you will come to realize some things are just meant to be. Have faith in that. Sending you hugs dear friend. Love, Shar xoxo

Michael Torres

November 4, 2008 at 3:01 PM

Janice I read your comments to Sharon and Im sorry about your relationship. Ive written a lot about relationships in my poetry. I ask that you read them to help you get through this time period as I am going through the same as you. God has someone there for you. That will appreciate you more then anything. Don't torment have hope and trust in him he is the great comforter and he will mend your heart. I will be praying for closer or his return or Gods will in your life. God less you Michael

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