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a faint booming note deep in the everglades marsh ~ a bird seldom seen it's distinctive call like a pebble drop in stream ~ elusive bittern Spring Flower, Bird Or Butterfly Haiku × 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin Date written: 02/14/2023

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Date: 2/27/2023 3:16:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. It's amazing how some of the most elusive birds have the strongest calls. Congratulations. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/27/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for the visit and congratulations, Sara:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 8:05:00 PM
A very beautiful haiku on bittern. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/27/2023 5:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 5:40:00 PM
Very descriptive, Edward, congratulations:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 5:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Edward, on your winning achievement; your set of haiku is so lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the spring metaphors
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 5:52:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and feedback, Lasaad:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 12:04:00 PM
- A lovely double haiku, Edward - Congratulations on a first place in the contest :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations and high fives Edward! Love your creative avian choice for your haiku! Charming imagery! Blessings to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and feedback, Sam:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away............................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 7:43:00 AM
Wonderful win Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
Date: 2/25/2023 3:35:00 AM
Ed, wonderful imagery in your set of haiku's, congratulations on your first place win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/25/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Tania:-) Most obliged.

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