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Bitter taste of abandon

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You turned your back and cut me loose not caring how I felt cast me aside and left me hanging as you just walked away Orphaned discarded and rejected wondered how I would survive but I somehow from within summoned the strength I needed to forgive that treachery to become the Me I am today AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on May 18, 2025 for contest ABANDON sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE

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Date: 5/18/2025 9:39:00 AM
Very resilient- power in your words
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/18/2025 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paige ~
Date: 5/18/2025 8:04:00 AM
the loss of a-band-on is like that of a ring .......wowza nice write.....len
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/18/2025 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Len ~ have a wonderful day

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