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Bitter Sweet Cage

feeling like a man with a low income wage am locked in a cage was i locked? or did i lock myself? feeling like i cant leave? do i wanna leave? sometimes it feels comfortable, other times its unbearable, but i cant leave, or i dont try to leave, at times the cage can be called home, other times i feel like a prisoner, under the dome! why wount i leave? i must leave. i think i love her and our relationship, at times it just feels like am caged, filled with rage, i gotta leave leave i tell you!!! but wait, calm down, breath. fill at home she says, like a parrot in a cage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/5/2016 4:33:00 PM
Anunda, that's a crazy ending...I love it. Linda
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Date: 12/21/2013 2:36:00 PM
I like the mood of indecision and angst you have created.
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:38:00 AM
Wow i can relate to d cage feeling, and being hard n unsure to leave. Superb poem!
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:00:00 AM
great potential there...(check typos brother)
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