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Bitter-Sweet Memory

Fantasy challenge Undocumented hand sport Emissions exhaust!!! Using balls and club Causing eruption in space. Bringing forth sweet cream!!

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/12/2010 5:38:00 PM

I think I get it!!...Or do I just have a dirty mind too?...Well done, Marty! (What was the final score?) - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2010 12:25:00 PM

Hmmm, is it just me with a dirty mind here . YOu seem to have described a "sport" I know of which is very famous in the world. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 7:06:00 PM

Sounds like Wiffle Ball dynamics ... but cannot imagine them bringing forth sweet cream... am I missing something here? whose fantasy is this? .. I just luv guessing games... enjoyed.. smile ... "Sweetheart" P.S. throw in some chocolates and flowers .. now there's a fantasy!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/11/2010 3:45:00 PM

wild game poem

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/11/2010 2:44:00 PM

Love the title and the Fantasy challenge...Charma:)