Bitten

Beast springs - Innocent Insatiable Prey – Moments Anticipating Eternity- Dual hearts Thumping – Frantic breath Hungry fangs Depress- Delicious Juices flow- Painstaking Ecstasy- Beast and Prey Want more-

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2011 9:58:00 AM

Oooh, the vampire fans would like this one, David. But I can see nature taking its course as the beast and prey make an encounter. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2011 7:28:00 AM

Also sounds like a passionate interlude of lovers David... at least the way I am reading it my friend.. I tend to think of everything as a love fest.. haha.. amazing visual lines David.. hungry for more luv...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 6:29:00 AM

Interesting work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 12:19:00 AM

Beast and Prey, I liked how you did this. Making it feel so immediate, David. Delicious juices a really cool line!