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Bits of Delicacies

night market! a juggle of flavors
succulent and citrusy with
pears  pumpkins  peaches inflamed
and clothed in sweetened rinds like
watercolors of  tangerine and mauve...
stems dipped in waters of tender sun
         flesh touching flesh,
         nectar glazing bronze on squirts turned into nectar, 
         into  savory brine... then to wiggle 
         upon a  harvest filling
quilted baskets sucked and chewed: beaded 
globules, bulbs rippling in own honeyed pools,
tangy fruitage which bears the ripest of ovules 
lacing the tongue ambrosial. tangy...
         and ladies like rush home with flushed romance
         in their heads
with  piles of delicacies bending  swirling 
on  their ample chests
to taste the liquid   radiant syrup 
of eve's craving for a night lovers' feast.


For Debbie Guzzi's Just A Little Bit Of Sugar
2/22/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/27/2017 1:31:00 AM
A good 'little bits of sugar. What a feast. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/26/2017 4:09:00 PM
Love the atmosphere created here, very nice ... congrats!
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Date: 2/26/2017 12:41:00 PM
A luscious write full of imagery and wonderful metaphor.
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Date: 2/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
a VERY SUCCULENT POEM.
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:57:00 PM
This poem makes made me hungry! Good Job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:35:00 AM
Your poetry always sings and paints beautiful mental images in the readers heart and mind my friend! This is a true gem and its suggestive romance at home of a spouse/lover inspires thoughts of how much we love our partners. Stellar and fine flowing verses, with the heart displayed in its glory.A7 A fav..
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful imagery ... Like so much ...
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:51:00 AM
Great imagery nette, great everything! Smoking hot too...
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Date: 2/18/2017 7:31:00 AM
Nette beautifull penned, I was there in 6he market . .
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Date: 2/18/2017 12:06:00 AM
How did you figure out I call my house " Night Market" ? LOL kidding! Loved the poem!
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Date: 2/17/2017 11:48:00 PM
Juicy, sweet but a hot sizzler for sure! You really got me going.
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Date: 2/17/2017 4:40:00 PM
Naughty, Naughty - could have been written for Blanche Devereaux! I love it, I love it. Now I'm going to eat an orange.
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Date: 2/17/2017 4:28:00 PM
Fabulous nette, great alliteration and imagery
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:23:00 PM
I'm with Frederic below because this one is ripe for the picking, that's for sure. Quite sensual and delicious Nette and really takes the mind to so many different places.
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:17:00 PM
sometimes I'm glad I'm a writer of poetry and when reading another poet's work can allow my imagination go where ever their words allow my mind to go
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