Bits of Delicacies

night market! a juggle of flavors
succulent and citrusy with
pears  pumpkins  peaches inflamed
and clothed in sweetened rinds like
watercolors of  tangerine and mauve...
stems dipped in waters of tender sun
         flesh touching flesh,
         nectar glazing bronze on squirts turned into nectar, 
         into  savory brine... then to wiggle 
         upon a  harvest filling
quilted baskets sucked and chewed: beaded 
globules, bulbs rippling in own honeyed pools,
tangy fruitage which bears the ripest of ovules 
lacing the tongue ambrosial. tangy...
         and ladies like rush home with flushed romance
         in their heads
with  piles of delicacies bending  swirling 
on  their ample chests
to taste the liquid   radiant syrup 
of eve's craving for a night lovers' feast.


For Debbie Guzzi's Just A Little Bit Of Sugar
2/22/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Neumann Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 1:31 AM
A good 'little bits of sugar. What a feast. Many wishes, Kai
Barden Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Love the atmosphere created here, very nice ... congrats!
Inman Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:41 PM
A luscious write full of imagery and wonderful metaphor.
Bayles Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:00 PM
a VERY SUCCULENT POEM.
Anish Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 11:57 PM
This poem makes made me hungry! Good Job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lindley Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Your poetry always sings and paints beautiful mental images in the readers heart and mind my friend! This is a true gem and its suggestive romance at home of a spouse/lover inspires thoughts of how much we love our partners. Stellar and fine flowing verses, with the heart displayed in its glory.A7 A fav..
Gupta Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful imagery ... Like so much ...
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Great imagery nette, great everything! Smoking hot too...
La France Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Nette beautifull penned, I was there in 6he market . .
Vaso Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 12:06 AM
How did you figure out I call my house " Night Market" ? LOL kidding! Loved the poem!
Datu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 11:48 PM
Juicy, sweet but a hot sizzler for sure! You really got me going.
Wanter Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Naughty, Naughty - could have been written for Blanche Devereaux! I love it, I love it. Now I'm going to eat an orange.
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Fabulous nette, great alliteration and imagery
Green Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 3:23 PM
I'm with Frederic below because this one is ripe for the picking, that's for sure. Quite sensual and delicious Nette and really takes the mind to so many different places.
Parker Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 3:17 PM
sometimes I'm glad I'm a writer of poetry and when reading another poet's work can allow my imagination go where ever their words allow my mind to go
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