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Bits and Bytes

life drain that needs a new installment over flow, the curvaceous wash of social media privacy perishable, burden of risk tech gadgetry, finger punched detachment tangle of cyber speak, sheared discourse movement pitched in Tik Tok rhythm always another world to screen into change that covers me like mud Poem revised: June 17, 2021

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2021 6:30:00 AM

If they get hit by cars while watching their phones, you may be witnessing Darwin’s Theory play out. Perhaps scientists will come up with a stupidity vaccination!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/24/2021 7:30:00 AM

True. Attention's absorption into cellphones is certainly a street hazard. Safe travels to all. Sincerely, Brian

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/22/2021 6:09:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/22/2021 8:07:00 PM

Hello Kim. My appreciation for your note of congratulations. The poem received an earlier NA but Brian Strand gave it a second evaluation, favorable. All the best, Brian

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/22/2021 4:21:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wisdom, exposing technological reality we are challenged to cope with to continue learning. God bless you.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/22/2021 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. Your congratulatory remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes always, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/21/2021 5:23:00 AM

Wonderful. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/21/2021 9:41:00 AM

Hello Christuraj Alex, Thanks very much for your congratulatory comment. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/20/2021 9:56:00 AM

A wonderful "Bits and Bytes" write. Those that do not read the paper and bound books are missing out. Today many only read e-books. So Sad. Have a blessed day writing away................

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/20/2021 10:29:00 AM

Hello Paula, My appreciation for your drop by + affirmative comment. Best wishes always. Brian

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/18/2021 6:52:00 AM

Nothing like a real book to fire our synapses. Still the bits and bytes do hold their own attraction.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 8:27:00 AM

Yes, but I do cringe when I see folks looking into hand held phones as they cross the street. Thank you for dropping by. Cheers, Brian

Anais Vionet

Date: 6/16/2021 7:59:00 AM

I love-hate technology too =]

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/16/2021 9:40:00 AM

Hi Anais, Given my advanced age, technology for me is a sinkhole. I still read paper bound books. Thank you for your comment. Be well. Brian