Bites of Apple Pies

A pple pies, that's what I want to bite.
B egging my mom: "Mommy please, please..", as I
C ome closer to her..
D ancing a little to the left and right;
E very move a way to tempt my mom
F or that sweet delicious pie..
G iving her a kiss to her lips. And
H ugs so tight.. Finally,
I ris, my mom, said yes, yes we go and buy
J umping thrice for I am happy and thrilled, I
K not my arm to my mom's.
L ovingly, not wanting any other mom.
M oving fast as we could to buy not one or two but a plentitude of pies.
N oting, how generous is my mom for I was just asking for one.
O ven-fresh, my mouth waters as I smell the apple pies.
P icking one piece, 
Q uickly, I took a luscious large bite.
R ich rumble rush of savory pie
S ated my appetite.
T aunting me to take more! more!
U nder my mom's gaze, Again I eat and eat.
V ery delicious, I said to my mom
W idening my grin and giving thumbs up.
X eric is my throat, I drink and drink.
Y ummy! So yummy, that I eat four pies in a row.
Z ipper of my pants, my oh my, I hardly can close!

*** Xeric  means dry.
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Contest Name	Your favorite Poem Contest 

© O. E. Guillermo
9:36PM
October 10, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 20, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Congrats on your win! I love this!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Wow Olive a great one and my fav too,, congrats on big win!
Ebbs Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Very nice, like it and apple pie :)
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
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March 19, 2015 at 12:30 PM
OLIVE, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 9:25 AM
thanks much Lolly LInda.. love too.. !
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Great Abecedarian poem Olive. Congratulations on your win.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:39 PM
thanks much Brenda.. :)! God bless you.. :)!
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Nicely crafted poem, congrats on the win
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 9:09 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!
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December 8, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Great interpretation of the contest. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:39 AM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:38 PM
thanks much Jan.. :)!
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Very clever alphabet poem, Olive, enjoyed it. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:37 PM
thanks much Cheri. :)! I appreciate my place in your contest. :) I enjoyed writing this.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Haha, had me chuckling and hungry at the same time Olive. I've just recently baked 3 Apple Pies as you know, and my work colleagues devoured them. Fine ABC Miss Olive, and tasty also. As for your Zipper, no more second helpings ;) James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:11 PM
hahahha :D!!! eat for me then.. :P
Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Too far to throw :(
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:30 AM
thanks MR. James.. :D hahah why you didn't throw one pie here... :D so ill judge too your apple pie.. :P
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:53 PM
Olive, my goodness, this is one of the best ABC poems I ever saw and also one of the best in the pie contest. one of YOUR personal bests!! A fave on this one.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:26 AM
thanks much Andrea.. :D!!! am happy that you like as much as I like writing it when I made this.. :D
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Heyyyy Olive_eloi....I told you to watch your figure:) But never mind...next time I'll help you with your pies and save you having to eat the whole lot!:) Enjoyed your tricky form...well executed. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:24 AM
staying at home makes me lil chubby Paul... :D!! you know one of my hobby is cooking.. :D!!! and mmmmmmmnnn my forte are sweets :D ;) so you know.. :P
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October 10, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Dear Olive, It was the same way at my house! Nothing can beat our mothers' apple pies. (Barbara Gorelick wrote of this as well. I haven't posted mine, not nearly as good as yours.) Wishing you success in the contest with this delightful poem! Love, carolyn
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Aha.. I shall Visit BArbara's then.. :D!!! After I read PAul's entry I got inspired to expand it... :D!!!! but well, in more happy tone though.. :P hahhaha hope Paul will not mind.. :D
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:21 AM
wonderful ABC poem made me want pie NOW - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:42 PM
thanks much sweet Jan.. :D I appreciate it.. :D!
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