Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Dodoitsu

Bite Who

I watched a little red ant.
It was running up the wall.
The circus clowns were laughing!
The wallpaper saw.

That red ant did not bite me.
But his distant cousins did.
Made me want to bite my friends.
Haiku Debbie, run!

© April 12, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  !!!BITE ME!!! 	 
Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

P.S.  I love you, Debbie, and your haiku!

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 10:27 PM Congrats on your super win, Dane! Blessings, Rhonda

Debbie Guzzi April 16, 2012 at 3:47 PM I love you too Danie!!! I will call as soon as I remember when I am near the phone DUH?? Congrad's Light & love [sonnet..you will write a sonnet...yes i see it now a sonnet for Debbie...ahh yes YOU WILL write a sonnet..] Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 17, 2012 at 7:59 AM Hey girl-friend. I am editing photos and tending to some much needed plant care...peach trees struggling. But if your contest is still open, I will write tonight! Love you, much.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 17, 2012 at 8:00 AM Carol, Is that you in the picture? It is BEAUTIFUL!

Gwendolen Song April 14, 2012 at 9:22 PM Now this one is a real hoot, Dane Ann. Just fabulous...Congrats on your great imagination. Gwendolen

Joyce Johnson April 14, 2012 at 8:58 PM Congratulations Dane Ann. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:35 PM congrats Dane Ann on sweet success with this super entry luv..thankxxx Debbie the Haiku Queen too..

Jared Pickett April 12, 2012 at 9:18 AM HaHa, this was funny!! I looked down and saw a red bump on my arm from the ant bite.. Well done my friend...:JP]

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 12, 2012 at 6:58 AM Well put i enjoyed this....