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Bite Who

I watched a little red ant. It was running up the wall. The circus clowns were laughing! The wallpaper saw. That red ant did not bite me. But his distant cousins did. Made me want to bite my friends. Haiku Debbie, run! © April 12, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: !!!BITE ME!!! Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. P.S. I love you, Debbie, and your haiku!

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 4/16/2012 10:27:00 PM
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Congrats on your super win, Dane! Blessings, Rhonda
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/16/2012 3:47:00 PM
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I love you too Danie!!! I will call as soon as I remember when I am near the phone DUH?? Congrad's Light & love [sonnet..you will write a sonnet...yes i see it now a sonnet for Debbie...ahh yes YOU WILL write a sonnet..]
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 4/17/2012 7:59:00 AM
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Hey girl-friend. I am editing photos and tending to some much needed plant care...peach trees struggling. But if your contest is still open, I will write tonight! Love you, much.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/16/2012 11:56:00 AM
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Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 4/17/2012 8:00:00 AM
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Carol, Is that you in the picture? It is BEAUTIFUL!
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 4/14/2012 9:22:00 PM
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Now this one is a real hoot, Dane Ann. Just fabulous...Congrats on your great imagination. Gwendolen
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
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Congratulations Dane Ann. Love, Joyce
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 4/14/2012 7:35:00 PM
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congrats Dane Ann on sweet success with this super entry luv..thankxxx Debbie the Haiku Queen too..
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Jared Pickett
Date: 4/12/2012 9:18:00 AM
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HaHa, this was funny!! I looked down and saw a red bump on my arm from the ant bite.. Well done my friend...:JP]
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/12/2012 6:58:00 AM
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Well put i enjoyed this....
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