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Trussty Jasmine: Why are There Children Who are Scared at Night?

Bite The Bullet Puerile caliber, risks crypt goes I, peashooter to Saturday-night-special, relatives riddled our home, armed, shot nigh, puerile caliber, risks crypt goes I, mortared appendages, aimless, I sigh, pinched and kissed, triggered red-bled cheeks, et al, puerile caliber, risks crypt goes I, peashooter to Saturday-night-special. REVISED 2020 October 25 *Honorable Mention* Pick-A-Title, Vol 24 - Triolet ~~Edward Ibeh

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:29:00 PM

very colorful iand inventive magery in this one, William. Congrats in the contest

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2020 6:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, for your insightful considerations, Aloha!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/13/2020 11:51:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful triolet, William:-)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2020 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Edward, for your different contest ideas and my honorable placement my friend, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2020 2:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, and my compliments on your honorable win my friend, Aloha!

John Watt

Date: 11/13/2020 12:09:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win. I liked the line 'peashooter to Saturday-night-special' especially. Peace! John

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, John, for that line is the heart, and my compliments on your righteous 'escaping' win my friend, Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2020 5:46:00 PM

I'm back William to say congratulations on the win! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2020 8:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda, Aloha!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/12/2020 3:19:00 PM

Hi William, We chose the same theme. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, and my compliments to you as well, Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/26/2020 6:25:00 AM

O William. I like this very much, especially the "...triggered red-bled cheeks, et al..."

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/26/2020 5:05:00 PM

Thank you, Linda, for your considerate noting my friend, Aloha! William