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Line Gauthier's BiteSize Poem no87 Contest 7 Aug 24

Bite Size -- Beyond Dimensions

Grows the night when breaths lay 
  quietly
On obscure spaces fluid as the wind,
Where clouds of rest become a 
   hammock ,
Lulling frayed nerves with incense
As blend of matter and being cleaves-

For beyond dimensions...grows the 
    the night.
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Brul Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 5:22 AM
You have the power to speak with substance in just few words! You are a master of brevity in colour. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. A fave!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 4:39 AM
Back with congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 7:31 AM
beautiful poem ~
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Congrats on your win in Line Gauthier's contest, Nette. So many of your poems, like this one, contain that 'extra dimension.' ~ Cheers, Gershon
Anaya Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations for winning the bite size contest, Nette! That's poetry, I like your style.
Woods Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on a much deserved win! Xo
mysore Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 4:52 AM
amazing thought: night beyond dimensions. beautiful dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers.
Beaufort Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Nette, you have a way to transport me to an ethereal place and one that seems dreamy. It's fun to go there for a while and makes me smile to explore it. Thanks!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Has an ethereal feel! … Where clouds of rest become a hammock. Lovely, Nette!
One Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:02 AM
You said a lot in only few lines.. a lovely arrangement of words..
Rodgers Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Dear Nette, I loved how your words show night and sleep are portrayed as expansive experiences that offer more than just physical rest. I loved to dream and yes it provides an opportunity for spiritual renewal and a connection to the ineffable aspects of existence. Well Inked!- Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Empress Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 7:54 AM
You have a way with painting imagery through words dear nette, this is beautiful! I especially love “ Where clouds of rest become a hammock ,” unique description of clouds so well delivered and written! Best wishes for the contest
Rose  Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Dear Nette, this has your signature of excellency all over it, your lines are both subliminal and beautiful ! You always raise the bar when it comes to poetry, love your precious heart. Wishing you the best day ever dear xo
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:32 PM
We all welcome it, a chance to recharge our batteries and forget about the turmoil of the day. Hope you're keeping well Nette. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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