Bite Me

That look in her eyes hungered desire ignites she naked to bare I slowly her tongue asps, tasting proud, I'm bitten, lips licking .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzzi Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:50 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening. Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Debbie, lovely to see you here, hugs//James :) :)
Duncan Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 8:36 PM
very nice :)
Fraser Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Glad you liked it Debbie, James :) :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 7:05 AM
Huge James, my my my.....!=') blushes .~olive eloisa
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 11:10 AM
My my my, I've made you blush again ;-) hugs always for you little one, Dino James xxxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:52 PM
This poem is quite wonderful James! Wow!
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Thank you Connie, I love my long story poems, but I so love these short forms, for little says so much. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James xx
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Even at this ripe old age, you can still get a rise outta me! LOL Okay, settle down Jack, settle down!
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Oh my Jack, I'm glad you enjoyed this short poem of mine. Happy weekend to you Sir, James :)
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 9:17 AM
wowser! [her tongue asps!] great metaphor Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Hiya Debbie, glad you enjoyed, glad I wrote it. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James :) :)
Peranteau Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:51 PM
The proud uninhibitedtly enthusiastic, abounding in vitality, extremely joyful and vigorous soul I find here after being the missing pneuma for a small while my dear poetic friend ! What gives ? Fill mine plate with aw James ! *smiles* Wonderful to find you in comforting arms my friend ! Have a blessed journey ! Much love, james
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Thank you kindly James, it is a lovely feeling to be loved, especially after being hurt. Blessed weekend to you my poetic friend, much love from across the Atlantic, James......
Kiser Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Ooh, it happens!
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Indeed MLK it probably does. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James :)
Konos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Ooh Lah Lah
Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Nice reply I cannot lie, thanks Judy, James :) :)
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:11 PM
ooh how passionate a write James - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 3:25 PM
My mind in wander way out yonder in the Philippines. Way out yonder my mind did wander at the most wonderful beautiful scenes in the Philippines, hugs always /// James xx
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