Bite Me

That look in her eyes hungered desire ignites she naked to bare I slowly her tongue asps, tasting proud, I'm bitten, lips licking .

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/21/2015 7:50:00 PM

So nice to read your poetry this evening. Light & Love

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Debbie, lovely to see you here, hugs//James :) :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/17/2015 8:36:00 PM

very nice :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/18/2015 3:53:00 PM

Glad you liked it Debbie, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/12/2015 7:05:00 AM

Huge James, my my my.....!=') blushes .~olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 11:10:00 AM

My my my, I've made you blush again ;-) hugs always for you little one, Dino James xxxx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2015 11:52:00 PM

This poem is quite wonderful James! Wow!

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thank you Connie, I love my long story poems, but I so love these short forms, for little says so much. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/11/2015 3:45:00 PM

Even at this ripe old age, you can still get a rise outta me! LOL Okay, settle down Jack, settle down!

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 10:58:00 AM

Oh my Jack, I'm glad you enjoyed this short poem of mine. Happy weekend to you Sir, James :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2015 9:17:00 AM

wowser! [her tongue asps!] great metaphor Light & Love

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 10:52:00 AM

Hiya Debbie, glad you enjoyed, glad I wrote it. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James :) :)

James Peranteau

Date: 6/10/2015 9:51:00 PM

The proud uninhibitedtly enthusiastic, abounding in vitality, extremely joyful and vigorous soul I find here after being the missing pneuma for a small while my dear poetic friend ! What gives ? Fill mine plate with aw James ! *smiles* Wonderful to find you in comforting arms my friend ! Have a blessed journey ! Much love, james

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 10:37:00 AM

Thank you kindly James, it is a lovely feeling to be loved, especially after being hurt. Blessed weekend to you my poetic friend, much love from across the Atlantic, James......

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/10/2015 9:08:00 PM

Ooh, it happens!

James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 10:31:00 AM

Indeed MLK it probably does. Happy weekend to you, hugs, James :)

Judy Konos

Date: 6/10/2015 2:49:00 PM

Ooh Lah Lah

James Fraser
Date: 6/10/2015 3:11:00 PM

Nice reply I cannot lie, thanks Judy, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2015 2:11:00 PM

ooh how passionate a write James - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7

James Fraser
Date: 6/10/2015 3:25:00 PM

My mind in wander way out yonder in the Philippines. Way out yonder my mind did wander at the most wonderful beautiful scenes in the Philippines, hugs always /// James xx