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              Given adage,
        that when said, "With age comes wisdom",
      give it a twist, and better the challenge,
        Wisdom and age will come,
  but age must come alone, the outcome now has changed,
  without wisdom, age stands solo, new sort of ranged,
    exist humor with the exchanged.
  First wisdom and age are one, now just lonely age.


Date: 06/10/2019



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Date: 6/30/2019 7:10:00 PM
William congratulations on your win in my writing challenge sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/30/2019 8:25:00 PM
I'm still very ill but thanks ~ William
Date: 6/25/2019 9:53:00 PM
There's nothing sadder that 'just lonely age', William. Your thought provoking poem is beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/25/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thank you very kindly ~ William
Date: 6/25/2019 12:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, and William, how feminine your voice sounds. heehee. That sounds like a voice i have heard on youtube videos. Wish I knew all the tricks of you computer saavy people!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/25/2019 12:32:00 PM
Sorta letting soupers know it's a computerized voice-over, I believe Wing Warrior is the only other who utilizes voice activation--I'm uncertain if it is his true voice since I've only listened once--furthermore, soupers tend not to use that key so I sorta tapered off ~ William
Date: 6/10/2019 5:07:00 AM
I'm sure Dear Heart will feel crumbled with this poem. I see it highly placed.
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Date: 6/10/2019 5:13:00 AM
Constance is a stickler with rules--no problem with conformity, whereto, in and of itself, exist a challenge to a liberal soul, LOVE IT!--whereas, I nonchalantly delve in the core, whereto, the rest I ignore, forevermore Victor, Aloha William