Biscuits

Some get bread the others are thrown crums The ones who do not wait are chewing biscuits with their teeth sharpen by need They do believe in the next day For them the field grow spears among the ruins Tellus, Grinta Publishing House 2012 (pen name: Calin Derzelea)

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Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:41:00 PM

Calin Dengel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/3/2016 2:42:00 PM

I like how you wrote "teeth sharpened by need" I get that... Welcome to Soup. It may take some time to get used to the ins and outs. Hope you enjoy the community, here. Cyndi

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/3/2016 8:48:00 AM

Hi Calin, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2016 7:20:00 AM

Calin, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 5/3/2016 2:47:00 AM

Congrat. Beautiful poem-meditation.The ones who do not wait are chewing biscuits. Impatience is a comonmalady. It is necessary a statue of of patience...