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Birthday Suit Blues

A girlfriend took me to a nudist camp, And, wrapped up in my overcoat, I sighed; The sky was grey, the site was chilled and damp; In shock, I shuddered as I coldly eyed The frozen naked forms - and tried to hide. I kept my socks on, shivered with the cold; My shaking shrunken form was feeling old. I fetched my sweater, grabbed my trousers too - And wondered that those bodies were so bold; But warm, I watched them turning shades of blue. Just fiction – but I always wonder if nudists wear a sweater on cold days… For Cyndi’s Birthday Suit contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2012 8:16:00 PM
jack you did a great job. I'm sure if you had described yourself, you'd have scored much higher!! Anyway, congrats on the HM, my friend.
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 6:32:00 AM
A witty poem, Jack. Congratulations!!! :)
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Date: 5/11/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your birthday suit HM Jack and I think they must they don't want bits freezing off do they . Jack xx
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Date: 5/11/2012 3:11:00 AM
Jack congrats on your win...David
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Date: 5/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
Jack good imagery here, is it fiction? ha ha ..David
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:05:00 PM
how charming and full of winsome energy, jack.. go for the win in the nude!... huggs! :)
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:39:00 PM
hahaha, what an imagination, Jack. It must be interesting to see those weird bodies walking around. You gotta think half of them are terrible looking. Cute one.
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:36:00 PM
Well, Jack, maybe there are nudist colonies only in warm climates..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..I have wondered about nudist colonies also...Sara
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:22:00 PM
Every bit a winner Jack...Enjoyed this..It sure brought a smile!!...Love Diana
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:17:00 PM
That's really crazy, staying out in the freezing cold...Naked! Your write is truly amazing, I love it! I'm glad it was just fiction cause I believe that nudists are smarter than that..."turning shades of blue."! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!
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