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Birthday Roses

An array of lush peach roses To tickle a night of sweet cruises I'm sending them some miles away So she can gush at their display Ribbons sashay on rare bunches An array of lush peach roses For dear aunt whose warmth I share Through storm or sun she always cares Florets changing tints of colors Like moods spiked with fragrant flavors An array of of lush peach roses Each petal claims aunt's smooth graces And all love’s wonder she'll explore A thrilled wish the stars can’t ignore Go, ride on birthday that rouses With baskets of lush peach roses Brian Strand's Contest

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/15/2016 10:48:00 PM

To give a rose, is the deepest of desires that whom receives the rose, appreciates both the rose and the beauty of giving. :) Lovely poem!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/13/2012 11:22:00 PM

A lovely poem Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2012 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win in P.D.'s "Roses For P.D." contest Nette. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/13/2012 7:12:00 AM

Lovely nette congratulations xx

David Williams

Date: 2/13/2012 6:40:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win, fab..David

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/12/2012 7:36:00 PM

Nette....A wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest........S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 7:21:00 PM

congrats Ndtte luv on a fabulous fourth place win for this creative write on roses for PD my BFF and our own personal rose of PS luv..

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/12/2012 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful dedication nette, love Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 2:06:00 PM

NETTE, it has been an honor sponsoring my rose contest. (-: !!CONGRATULATION'S!! :-) HOW COULD I BE EVER SO THANKFUL FOR POETS LIKE you and everyone else HERE ON THE SOUP. I'm sending each and everyone roses right back. @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- .. here's a warm TEXAS ~HUG~ Have yourself a Happy Valentine's Day *always * PD.................. PS.... YOU DID NOT ADD MY DEDICATION..LOL.. THANK YOU ALWAYS..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/8/2012 3:47:00 PM

I'm happy that you wrote this lovely piece about wondrous woman, Nette. beautiful write of it. hugs back at ya

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

A true beauty!!! I love this form but sledom use it... may have to try to it again... creature of habbit I guess..lol... hope your well and a few more long hugs sent your way..... luv Michael

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/8/2012 12:25:00 PM

I just love the, "With baskets of lush peach roses" that line is truly special! This is a beautiful poem Nette! I just know that PD will certainly love this write! They are great, all these flowers of lush peach roses! Great write, Awesome Work!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/8/2012 9:51:00 AM

An excellent write in a very challenging form Nette.A chart topper here.Best wishes.

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/8/2012 9:44:00 AM

Just beautiful nette thank you for sharing this delight , Declan ...

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/8/2012 9:12:00 AM

Lovely baskets of lush peach roses, it's a dedication, loved, bl