Birthday Roses

An array of lush peach roses To tickle a night of sweet cruises I'm sending them some miles away So she can gush at their display Ribbons sashay on rare bunches An array of lush peach roses For dear aunt whose warmth I share Through storm or sun she always cares Florets changing tints of colors Like moods spiked with fragrant flavors An array of of lush peach roses Each petal claims aunt's smooth graces And all love’s wonder she'll explore A thrilled wish the stars can’t ignore Go, ride on birthday that rouses With baskets of lush peach roses Brian Strand's Contest
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Vaso Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 10:48 PM
To give a rose, is the deepest of desires that whom receives the rose, appreciates both the rose and the beauty of giving. :) Lovely poem!
Johnson Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 11:22 PM
A lovely poem Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your great win in P.D.'s "Roses For P.D." contest Nette. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Lovely nette congratulations xx
Williams Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Nette congrats on your win, fab..David
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Nette....A wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest........S.Ronthorpe
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 7:21 PM
congrats Ndtte luv on a fabulous fourth place win for this creative write on roses for PD my BFF and our own personal rose of PS luv..
Scholtz Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful dedication nette, love Elizabeth
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February 12, 2012 at 2:06 PM
NETTE, it has been an honor sponsoring my rose contest. (-: !!CONGRATULATION'S!! :-) HOW COULD I BE EVER SO THANKFUL FOR POETS LIKE you and everyone else HERE ON THE SOUP. I'm sending each and everyone roses right back. @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- .. here's a warm TEXAS ~HUG~ Have yourself a Happy Valentine's Day *always * PD.................. PS.... YOU DID NOT ADD MY DEDICATION..LOL.. THANK YOU ALWAYS..
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February 8, 2012 at 3:47 PM
I'm happy that you wrote this lovely piece about wondrous woman, Nette. beautiful write of it. hugs back at ya
Falotico Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 3:42 PM
A true beauty!!! I love this form but sledom use it... may have to try to it again... creature of habbit I guess..lol... hope your well and a few more long hugs sent your way..... luv Michael
Sivey Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 12:25 PM
I just love the, "With baskets of lush peach roses" that line is truly special! This is a beautiful poem Nette! I just know that PD will certainly love this write! They are great, all these flowers of lush peach roses! Great write, Awesome Work!
Poet Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 9:51 AM
An excellent write in a very challenging form Nette.A chart topper here.Best wishes.
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Just beautiful nette thank you for sharing this delight , Declan ...
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February 8, 2012 at 9:12 AM
Lovely baskets of lush peach roses, it's a dedication, loved, bl
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