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Birthday Pie

Jumped high, with delight, went for win. As Tripp tried his luck on the scene. The Springer had dream - Was it the whipped cream? A pie, as a prize, could have been.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Key lime pie is a treat! Fun poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 6:52 PM
Thank you, sweet friend! Big hugs
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 2:12 PM
A yummy one
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 2:56 PM
Licking whipped cream from the lips…goes good with so much ;)
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 8:31 PM
Saved by the bell... Lem and Ma-Rang-Pie
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:55 AM
LOL! so true!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:11 PM
entertaining and delightful
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Pettit Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Key lime pie is one of my favorites. Nice write!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Thank you, Robert! Have a slice :)
Hind Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 5:10 PM
I get this is about two people competing for the prize? This is cute, :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 12:30 PM
My daughter’s dog leapt up and almost got the pie…what a rascal!
Delegans Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Enjoyed reading your lively limerick, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 10:03 AM
Another fun write for another great picture. Looks like Key Lime pie. If yes, then I want a slice or two. Please??? Hahaha!!! Hope You Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 12:44 PM
So glad you enjoyed!
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