Birthday Lady From Algiers

A birthday lady from Algiers
Full of despair and woeful tears
Cos to her surprise
She cant see her eyes
Too many wrinkles seemed to appear

She went to her doc for advice
Saying look at me I don't look nice
So she had a face tuck
Now with any luck
She will lose that look of surprise.



Penned 18/05/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 29, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Seren,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda
Haick Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 4:08 PM
LOL! Congratulations on a fantastic win, Seren!
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Annalise.....Seren
Sietesantos Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! This gave me the chuckle that I needed today!
Roberts Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Lol made me chuckle too....Seren
Nair Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:12 PM
It's a witty write.Congrats on the win, Seren!!
Roberts Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Thanks Jag ....Seren
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Lovely and witty set! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Hi Paul nice to see you, thx for stopping by....Seren
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Seren
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Thank you Ram .... Seren
A  Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Seren, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 2:19 AM
thank you Skat ...Seren
Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on your limericks and your win. Love, joyce
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Joyce for stopping by...Seren
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Dear Seren, The second verse blew me away and it is featured in the birthday booklet. Congratulations on your win and thanks for participating in a contest to wish some special ladies happy birthday. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Was fun to do Carolyn, thank you for the placement...Seren
Horne Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 1:47 PM
LOL, had a chuckle picturing this : )
Roberts Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Lol Jack all who have face lifts seem to look surprised....thx for stopping by ......Seren
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:36 AM
LOL Love this humourous write Seren. Hugs Jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 6:58 AM
thank Jan trying to be funny and ok for all ages isn't always easy..... Seren
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