Birthday Lady From Algiers

A birthday lady from Algiers
Full of despair and woeful tears
Cos to her surprise
She cant see her eyes
Too many wrinkles seemed to appear

She went to her doc for advice
Saying look at me I don't look nice
So she had a face tuck
Now with any luck
She will lose that look of surprise.



Penned 18/05/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
Seren,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:08:00 PM
LOL! Congratulations on a fantastic win, Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Annalise.....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! This gave me the chuckle that I needed today!
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:42:00 PM
Lol made me chuckle too....Seren
Date: 5/27/2014 10:12:00 PM
It's a witty write.Congrats on the win, Seren!!
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Jag ....Seren
Date: 5/27/2014 9:46:00 AM
Lovely and witty set! Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:59:00 AM
Hi Paul nice to see you, thx for stopping by....Seren
Date: 5/27/2014 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Ram .... Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 8:40:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/27/2014 2:19:00 AM
thank you Skat ...Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your limericks and your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/27/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Joyce for stopping by...Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 4:34:00 PM
Dear Seren, The second verse blew me away and it is featured in the birthday booklet. Congratulations on your win and thanks for participating in a contest to wish some special ladies happy birthday. Love, Carolyn
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 2:21:00 AM
Was fun to do Carolyn, thank you for the placement...Seren
Date: 5/18/2014 1:47:00 PM
LOL, had a chuckle picturing this : )
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/18/2014 6:22:00 PM
Lol Jack all who have face lifts seem to look surprised....thx for stopping by ......Seren
Date: 5/18/2014 4:36:00 AM
LOL Love this humourous write Seren. Hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/18/2014 6:58:00 AM
thank Jan trying to be funny and ok for all ages isn't always easy..... Seren
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