Birthday Girl

I have nothing to give you
Except for my empty hands
Put your hope
I will fling about air
No sweet words to wish you
except for the poor date
You will be there...days left.
I can't find any gift for you
without clay pot.
Many drops I waste
I know your eyes also make maps
          keep your drop in the pot.
You can see me within it,
Dry water of your feelings.
I have lost the magic
-to make you happy
            Here's my broken love
Touch it
You can see your smile
-On the sharp knife
And my faded sounds..."HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/9/2013 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on the first place win in the contest, Litan
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:10:00 PM
A very heartfelt write for Linda! Well done! Congratulations on your win, Litan!
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Date: 10/9/2013 3:05:00 PM
congrats on your win Litan
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:23:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem. Congrats in PD's birthday contest.
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:43:00 PM
Litan, CONGRATS! sweet win................... SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:32:00 AM
Hello Litan ... 28, first place!! ... certainly hard to choose .... all very friendly and caring, to the B-day girl Linda!! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:55:00 AM
Lol ! It's 24....Thank you ...65.It will help me for next
Date: 10/7/2013 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Litan, this is very nice from you..love it..... Yes It has ARRIVED my sweet birthday! Thank you for the awesome birthday poem and dedication. Yes I am silly, and enjoy having fun. Sometimes I wanna celebrate the joy knowing others enjoy life sharing simple SMILES with love. God Bless <3 always & forever ** LINDA
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Date: 10/5/2013 1:07:00 PM
A very heartfelt poem, Litan, I am sure the birthday girl will like it! Well done! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for all of the kind comments. I appreciate all of them!
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/5/2013 10:48:00 PM
Thanks kelly for sweet visit
Date: 10/5/2013 12:42:00 PM
- A lovely gift for a B. girl !!! - Luck in contest Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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