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Birthday Cake

In front of your door I paced, Stooped down and retied My shoelace, 13- the number That was glazed, Rung your doorbell since your keys Had been replaced. Once the door opens In a haste, And you'll stare at it In amaze, With a motive of A nutcase, I'll smash a birthday cake Right in your face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/29/2016 12:12:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Julia. :)
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Julia Ho
Date: 5/29/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thank you! Hope you enjoyed this poem as much as I enjoyed writing it :D
Date: 5/28/2016 3:16:00 AM
Julia, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Julia Ho
Date: 5/28/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you! *hugs back*
Date: 5/28/2016 1:44:00 AM
Julia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Julia Ho
Date: 5/28/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcome! Well, my name is Julia and I'm from Malaysia. I'm turning 17 this August and poetry is a newfound interest of mine. Thanks for wanting to be my friend! *hugs back*
Date: 5/27/2016 11:00:00 PM
Julia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Julia Ho
Date: 5/28/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcome, Linda! I have read a poem of yours and certainly do hope that I can write as brilliantly as you one day! I'm unsure of my poetic skills since I'm still a newbie! Looking forward to familiarize myself with more your poems in the near future :D xxxJulia