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Birds of Youth Released

My sweetest cravings, fledglings in a nest, were held up high; into the air released by eager hands of mine. A world to test was mine before youth’s wishing time had ceased. The birds who have come back to visit me are well-remembered dreams that have come true. The pleasant yellow finch; the chickadee and skylark gave me nothing I should rue. The cardinal would warble in my ear. I yearned for him, but he did not stay long. The bluebird too I hoped to always hear. She comes and goes. At times I hear her song. But long forgotten wishes to grow older are sparrows at my door as life grows colder. For the Contest: Pen a Sonnet on It

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:58:00 AM
Your marvelous creativity imagined this amazing metaphor of birds as childhood wishes. This was just enthralling to read. So inspiring to read your sonnets, Andrea
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Date: 5/19/2013 6:24:00 AM
Yes, childhood seems as though it will never go away when your young. You've done this beautifully. -Red
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:06:00 AM
looking at poems you posted, when away this year, this is a good start...oh those sparrows, as life grows colder, i know this feeling Andrea, love this poem....
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:53:00 PM
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Date: 6/14/2012 3:26:00 PM
You always seem to lend some metaphoric wisdom with many of your poems Andrea. I see why this one is a winner. Congrats!
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely sonnet, Andrea! It was a pleasure to read. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:02:00 AM
Birds are lovely creatures, Congratulation,a beautiful poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:08:00 AM
Andrea congrats on another win..David
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Date: 6/12/2012 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Andrea! :)
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Date: 6/12/2012 1:21:00 PM
beautiful insightful piece, Andrea - so glad to see it was a winner
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "# 182" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 6:29:00 PM
Do you ever write something bad?....ummmm...NO. Apparantly not...Congrats!
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Date: 6/11/2012 5:02:00 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Andrea...It is good to appreciate nature...Great work dear friend...Am very impressed...Congrats on your super win...
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:08:00 PM
Very, very charming..the older I get the more I appreciate the birdies! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:59:00 PM
Andrea, a nice wonderful win in Brian's contest... xox~ pd
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:33:00 PM
congrats on your multiple wins Andrea
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Date: 6/11/2012 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win for your fine poem... Terry
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:20:00 AM
I think that this is a really great poem. I hope that you write more like it. Thank you for sharing this one with us. It's just too perfect & wonderful!
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:04:00 PM
Bird brain Sally, lives up among the trees. She lives her life in facination for everything she sees. She made a friend when she was young with wings that flew away. But then one day it came to play. Who knows if love will ever stay.
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:19:00 PM
wow, an endearing piece with deep emotion, descriptive wordplay, and masterful use of meter, andie.. blow me down!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:57:00 AM
Boo Hoo.." its just to bitterly sweet for poor old Joe 'specially after you called me a teenager Andrea;Now I feel I'm being crushed by all those years my dear.." Anyhow getting back to it.." Its a good write to read tonight.. "well when tonight comes at least" ...but its night somewhere though.. ( you know Joe ) Oh don't mind him Andrea s'just the Muse,,!
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:10:00 AM
Had to chuckle at Pd's comment--the early bird gets the worm but on the serious note life does pass us by quickly. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 6/9/2012 9:12:00 PM
I liked the last couple of lines the most. Yes. the hourglass runs out eventually. Let me know what you think of my baseball poem "Another Season - Smokey Memories" Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/9/2012 5:01:00 PM
love the bird imagery as time references...well written ....love...Joseph
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:06:00 PM
Good Afternoon Andrea, this is a very lovely poem,,, makes me want to wake up and eat the worms..lol... kidding... except for the ending,,, i love the way you bared the sparrow without feathers at the end of your poem((burrr),,pd
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