Birds of Youth Released

My sweetest cravings, fledglings in a nest,
were held up high; into the air released
by eager hands of mine.  A world to test
was mine before youth’s wishing time had ceased.

The birds who have come back to visit me
are well-remembered dreams that have come true.
The pleasant yellow finch; the chickadee
and skylark gave me nothing I should rue.

The cardinal would warble in my ear.
I yearned for him, but he did not stay long.
The bluebird too I hoped to always hear.
She comes and goes.  At times I hear her song.

But long forgotten wishes to grow older
are sparrows at my door as life grows colder.



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Watt Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Your marvelous creativity imagined this amazing metaphor of birds as childhood wishes. This was just enthralling to read. So inspiring to read your sonnets, Andrea
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May 19, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Yes, childhood seems as though it will never go away when your young. You've done this beautifully. -Red
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 10:06 AM
looking at poems you posted, when away this year, this is a good start...oh those sparrows, as life grows colder, i know this feeling Andrea, love this poem....
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July 29, 2012 at 10:53 PM
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 3:26 PM
You always seem to lend some metaphoric wisdom with many of your poems Andrea. I see why this one is a winner. Congrats!
Merryman Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely sonnet, Andrea! It was a pleasure to read. Love, Kim
Goller Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Birds are lovely creatures, Congratulation,a beautiful poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Erich
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Andrea congrats on another win..David
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June 12, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Andrea! :)
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 1:21 PM
beautiful insightful piece, Andrea - so glad to see it was a winner
Brown Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "# 182" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Hunter Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Do you ever write something bad?....ummmm...NO. Apparantly not...Congrats!
Arowolo Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:02 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Andrea...It is good to appreciate nature...Great work dear friend...Am very impressed...Congrats on your super win...
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Very, very charming..the older I get the more I appreciate the birdies! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A   Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Andrea, a nice wonderful win in Brian's contest... xox~ pd
May Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:33 PM
congrats on your multiple wins Andrea
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June 11, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Congrats on your win for your fine poem... Terry
Dey Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:20 AM
I think that this is a really great poem. I hope that you write more like it. Thank you for sharing this one with us. It's just too perfect & wonderful!
Johnson Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Bird brain Sally, lives up among the trees. She lives her life in facination for everything she sees. She made a friend when she was young with wings that flew away. But then one day it came to play. Who knows if love will ever stay.
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 1:19 PM
wow, an endearing piece with deep emotion, descriptive wordplay, and masterful use of meter, andie.. blow me down!..:) huggs!
Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Boo Hoo.." its just to bitterly sweet for poor old Joe 'specially after you called me a teenager Andrea;Now I feel I'm being crushed by all those years my dear.." Anyhow getting back to it.." Its a good write to read tonight.. "well when tonight comes at least" ...but its night somewhere though.. ( you know Joe ) Oh don't mind him Andrea s'just the Muse,,!
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June 10, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Had to chuckle at Pd's comment--the early bird gets the worm but on the serious note life does pass us by quickly. Nice poem. love phyl
Anish Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 9:12 PM
I liked the last couple of lines the most. Yes. the hourglass runs out eventually. Let me know what you think of my baseball poem "Another Season - Smokey Memories" Peace & Love Matthew Anish
May Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 5:01 PM
love the bird imagery as time references...well written ....love...Joseph
A   Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Good Afternoon Andrea, this is a very lovely poem,,, makes me want to wake up and eat the worms..lol... kidding... except for the ending,,, i love the way you bared the sparrow without feathers at the end of your poem((burrr),,pd
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