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Vague contours your back seen against the evening glow sliding sun in the window. Silent statue of indifference. Mute defense against my desperation Anxious words try to enter you but they ricochet and bounce soundlessly ...... awkwardly on walls ............ fall unused at your feet. I feel my way to you with outstretched arms but they meet wood. Your bark acquiescent, unpleasant. I caress you with anguished hands, but they meet resistance. Your words flow... A bright river that ripples melodious. Rivulets of harmonious sound towards my hope. But my hearing-starved words drop off the air as wooden birds that have forgotten how to fly. *** March 7, 2017 © Darren White

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Date: 3/7/2017 10:01:00 PM
I love "hearing-starved words" as it emphasizes everything about this poem. <3
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 11:31:00 PM
Yeah, that is so true my friend <3
Date: 3/7/2017 3:43:00 PM
Great write, Darren! The image of woodwn birds that have forgotten how to fly...
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 11:31:00 PM
For me that is such a strong image, my own words always feel that way :)
Date: 3/7/2017 9:10:00 AM
Wow, what a creative and expressive write Darren. This is so cool, I love the metaphor here.
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you :) Even I love the metaphor, hah!
Date: 3/7/2017 2:14:00 AM
I can so feel you in this...great metaphor and imagery
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, and yes, you've understood that well.

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