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Birds of Sunset - Lullaby

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

My day has been twined with many a forest way,
it all began with a bright sun high and ablaze;
yes, so delightful was the deep forest maze,
now soft are the sun rays.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

So beautiful is the warmth of a sun fading,
such joy, I found myself in a cool stream wading;
and charming the melodies of birds in the shading,
I rest in a vast meadow, my hair braiding.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

Soon, I lay myself down in a carpet of green,
the sun is falling and what a breathtaking scene;
I fall asleep bathed in a golden sun serene;
to the lullaby of a hundred birds unseen.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . . 


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March 20, 2018


Poetry/Lyric/Lullaby/Birds of Sunset
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1005-378-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Lullaby in the Sunset
sponsor, Vermillian Scythe

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 10:31 PM
Lovely, BW. A beautiful read.
Gentry Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful peaceful lullaby. I enjoyed it, relaxing.
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Excellent write , Broken Wings, ...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Very pretty, Constance. I like the repeated refrain. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Sands Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Beautiful and freeing poem BW. Congratulations for your win :)
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:10 PM
what a dreamy poem Constance and the picture is the perfect accompaniment to your lyrics:-) hugs jan xx
Wanter Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 6:31 PM
You really wrote something special with this one. Love the idea of a bird duet.
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