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Birds of Passage

Yellow diamonds, just stopping by- wag their tails..onwards they fly note yellow wagtails on our garden trees yesterday

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Date: 8/25/2009 6:29:00 PM
I do not have the pleasure of these gorgeous birds in my neck-o-the-woods! thanks for the beautiful cinqku! Brian! jimbo
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Date: 8/14/2009 2:45:00 PM
I've been feeding the gold finches their favorite thistle seed. They are little patches of sunlight on a cloudy day. I don't know wagtails but thanks for the introduction to them. Thanks for your kind words, Brian. Joyce
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful visionary I got from this poem.
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Date: 8/12/2009 5:04:00 PM
Beautiful sight Brian even in your write, I enjoy these at my home also. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/12/2009 9:38:00 AM
Charming; I can picture this in my mind. Thanks.
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Date: 8/12/2009 7:07:00 AM
I love the fleetingness of the moment you capture in this poem. We need to savor all the rich fleeting moments, like your yellow diamonds, before they fly away. As always, well done. Krista
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Date: 8/12/2009 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful Cingku Brian. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 6:30:00 AM
A lovely poem to start the day....such a mental image to make me smile ! ~ Thanks for that!~ Carrie
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Date: 8/12/2009 5:14:00 AM
What a delightful poem, Brian. Thanks for your comments. Always, DAS-J
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:20:00 AM
Yellow diamonds..I love that imagery...wonderful work.
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Date: 8/12/2009 3:48:00 AM
Gold Finch? Lovely write. Sara
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