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Birds of a Feather

The twisting reach of my arm stuck in the sleeve shaking like a finch flustering in the marble basin as if in slow motion startled the place into a swift, shifting mess of feathers that were flocked and gathered at the water's cemented edge, cracking waiting for winter to pass which led your snowflake speckled eyeslashes to turn toward me, melting and in that one, heavy, foggy breath we met.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/8/2018 1:28:00 PM
This is very sweet.
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:03:00 AM
wow ... yeah ... you do poetry very well ... i mean to be honest we love your style ... "sleeves" ... a write wrapped around or in the form of a stitch woven in a "sleeve" ... sew much can be sewn here ... this write for this reader is blistering hot ... would like to read what you think of my writes ... im really not big on the reading of poetry ... but from the couple I have read so far ... uhm ... yeah ... wouldn't want you to think ima stalker ... with that said ... hit us up ... see me hope
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Date: 12/21/2017 10:02:00 AM
Such wonderful imagery and being a bird lover, an extra special treat! Love it :)
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Date: 12/21/2017 10:34:00 AM
Thanks!

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