Birds of a Feather

The twisting reach of my arm
stuck in the sleeve 
shaking like a finch flustering in the marble basin
as if in slow motion 
startled the place into a swift, shifting mess of feathers 
that were flocked and gathered at the water's cemented edge, cracking 
waiting for winter to pass 
which led your snowflake speckled eyeslashes to turn toward me, melting
and in that one, heavy, foggy breath
we met.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:28 PM
This is very sweet.
Stars Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:03 AM
wow ... yeah ... you do poetry very well ... i mean to be honest we love your style ... "sleeves" ... a write wrapped around or in the form of a stitch woven in a "sleeve" ... sew much can be sewn here ... this write for this reader is blistering hot ... would like to read what you think of my writes ... im really not big on the reading of poetry ... but from the couple I have read so far ... uhm ... yeah ... wouldn't want you to think ima stalker ... with that said ... hit us up ... see me hope
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Such wonderful imagery and being a bird lover, an extra special treat! Love it :)
Saruhrosen Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Thanks!
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