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Bird's Laughter

Delightful sounds of joy sorinkle from the trees. Subtle specks auditable wonder cause my thoughts to pause. This far away sound gives me hope and happiness. Is it their bright laughter I hear?

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Date: 9/3/2024 3:02:00 PM
Like to think so Dietra. Example of how good a poet you are. Not easy to know a poem is complete. Think you trust your ability now. Writing should always give pleasure and be relaxing. Too often we search for perfection Modern technology gives excuse. Drove me mad as ece teacher when people spent time getting child's profile picture perfect when they could be spending time with children. Nothing wrong with longer poems if long for reason and enjoyable to write and read. Regards David
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