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Birds In Flight

smart v formation departing south for winter food for the asking 10/27/2014

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/8/2023 11:04:00 AM

Hello Eve, yes it is smart the way the birds form the V formation while flying south. Hugs.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/2/2014 2:28:00 AM

Very beautiful haiku Eve, my dear friend! Love watching once in s while the hummingbirds and others beautiful birds fly Arond my home. Get a lot of ducks and like to feed them, feel so bad for them because they always seem to be searching for some to eat outside my front porch and driveway. Love and hugs! ;) give you a 7! ;) xxxx D.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/2/2014 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Dorian for stopping by and visiting. Birds are like any other creature once you feed them they always come back :) loves and hugs eve

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/29/2014 3:37:00 AM

really excellent picture eve they sure are in fight beautifully penned

Eve Roper
Date: 10/29/2014 9:50:00 AM

Thank you liam for your compliment,:) hugs eve

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/28/2014 8:17:00 PM

I love watching them, this haiku is so good.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/28/2014 8:41:00 PM

Thank you again Maurice, I also love watching them :) love and hugs :) eve

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/28/2014 9:18:00 AM

I can see those birds in V formation - just beautiful imagery. my friend! Bravo! Pandita

Eve Roper
Date: 10/28/2014 9:33:00 AM

Pandita, aren’t they beautiful when they’re in flight. Thank you for you dear comment. :) loves and hugs eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/28/2014 6:12:00 AM

V formation families going south. What an image! Loved it very much. God bless you. Love xxxx rajat

Eve Roper
Date: 10/28/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Rajat, I see the birds out all the time and was always courious where they are going, so I researched it before I wrote it :) loves and hugs eve

David Meade

Date: 10/27/2014 4:58:00 PM

I like your ending -- duck hunters!! very clever . . . all the best.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/27/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thank you David, I didn't mean it in that way, but that works too. Hugs and love :) eve From wikipedia: The primary motivation for migration of bird movements include those made in response to changes in food availability, habitat or weather to fly to another environment

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/27/2014 11:37:00 AM

I see the humour in the last line Eve. I can see the Robertson family out there waiting for them to pass.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/27/2014 12:29:00 PM

Haha... thank you Brenda, I bet they are behind a bush just waiting love and hugs eve