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Birds In Flight

smart  v formation
departing south for winter
food for the asking

  10/27/2014

birdfoodwinterhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

January 8, 2023 at 11:04 AM

Hello Eve, yes it is smart the way the birds form the V formation while flying south. Hugs.

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 2, 2014 at 2:28 AM

Very beautiful haiku Eve, my dear friend! Love watching once in s while the hummingbirds and others beautiful birds fly Arond my home. Get a lot of ducks and like to feed them, feel so bad for them because they always seem to be searching for some to eat outside my front porch and driveway. Love and hugs! ;) give you a 7! ;) xxxx D.

Eve Roper

November 2, 2014 at 8:24 AM

Thank you Dorian for stopping by and visiting. Birds are like any other creature once you feed them they always come back :) loves and hugs eve

Liam Mcdaid

October 29, 2014 at 3:37 AM

really excellent picture eve they sure are in fight beautifully penned

Eve Roper

October 29, 2014 at 9:50 AM

Thank you liam for your compliment,:) hugs eve

Maurice Yvonne

October 28, 2014 at 8:17 PM

I love watching them, this haiku is so good.

Eve Roper

October 28, 2014 at 8:41 PM

Thank you again Maurice, I also love watching them :) love and hugs :) eve

Pandita Sietesantos

October 28, 2014 at 9:18 AM

I can see those birds in V formation - just beautiful imagery. my friend! Bravo! Pandita

Eve Roper

October 28, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Pandita, aren’t they beautiful when they’re in flight. Thank you for you dear comment. :) loves and hugs eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 28, 2014 at 6:12 AM

V formation families going south. What an image! Loved it very much. God bless you. Love xxxx rajat

Eve Roper

October 28, 2014 at 8:32 AM

Thank you Rajat, I see the birds out all the time and was always courious where they are going, so I researched it before I wrote it :) loves and hugs eve

David Meade

October 27, 2014 at 4:58 PM

I like your ending -- duck hunters!! very clever . . . all the best.

Eve Roper

October 27, 2014 at 10:22 PM

Thank you David, I didn't mean it in that way, but that works too. Hugs and love :) eve From wikipedia: The primary motivation for migration of bird movements include those made in response to changes in food availability, habitat or weather to fly to another environment