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Birds' Final Lodging

Elder jays roam the tainted winds in herds, Alighting upstream like most holy birds Into the threshold of an inky night, And journey forth with brave rafters, onwards For lofty a view, their sweet rest’s delight. Although clouds withdraw from a hued backdrop This avian route, dismal, nary a flop Under bloodstained gust surviving a dodge; Before piteous age taints life , non-stop With hopes to reach their own destiny’s lodge. Yet, the valiant flock abandons a cry Invoking hymns droning a lullaby Through morn hours, the conception of new birth Sends angel wings on gates of heaven’s sky… Enshrining old jays’ flight with endless mirth! ................................ Rhyme Time With 5 Contest: For Laura Loo 10/6/2017 Checked via howmanysyllables.com, rhymezone.com
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Date: 11/2/2017 12:06:00 PM
Rather enjoyed this one, Nette. As always: chock-full of beautiful lines that bear the hallmark of your unique and individual style of poetry. Lovely writing! My very warmest regards. :) john
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:12:00 PM
Beautiful as always, Nette. Laura will love it. I do!!
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Date: 10/8/2017 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful Nette, a winner for sure, URGENT soupie sent !!!!
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:51:00 AM
A beautiful write..
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:00:00 PM
It isn't just about birds, is it, Nette! It is just wonderful. I will fav it.
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:01:00 PM
P.S. That is a perfect quote at the beginning.
Date: 10/6/2017 9:18:00 AM
This is beautiful.
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:44:00 AM
Your skills at writing an emotional poem is evident within this write! Your imagery is so powerful my friend you can't escape the words without a grand view! I loved this incredible piece this morning, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/6/2017 4:55:00 AM
A beautiful poem Nette, I see a winner already and a fav...Maria xx
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Date: 10/6/2017 4:19:00 AM
- Enjoy this beautiful poem Nette ... love the end - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:07:00 PM
Very beautiful nette, as alway! :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:36:00 PM
One thing is for sure-- your depth, expressive language, and literary presence make this poem incomparable!! Fly on!
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:10:00 PM
Written in creative style--the rhymes work well and the story flies like the birds it depicts--high into the winning zone!
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