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Birds' Final Lodging

Elder jays roam the tainted winds in herds, Alighting upstream like most holy birds Into the threshold of an inky night, And journey forth with brave rafters, onwards For lofty a view, their sweet rest’s delight. Although clouds withdraw from a hued backdrop This avian route, dismal, nary a flop Under bloodstained gust surviving a dodge; Before piteous age taints life , non-stop With hopes to reach their own destiny’s lodge. Yet, the valiant flock abandons a cry Invoking hymns droning a lullaby Through morn hours, the conception of new birth Sends angel wings on gates of heaven’s sky… Enshrining old jays’ flight with endless mirth! ................................ Rhyme Time With 5 Contest: For Laura Loo 10/6/2017 Checked via howmanysyllables.com, rhymezone.com
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Fleming Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Rather enjoyed this one, Nette. As always: chock-full of beautiful lines that bear the hallmark of your unique and individual style of poetry. Lovely writing! My very warmest regards. :) john
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October 8, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Beautiful as always, Nette. Laura will love it. I do!!
La France Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Beautiful Nette, a winner for sure, URGENT soupie sent !!!!
One Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:51 AM
A beautiful write..
Wanter Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:00 PM
It isn't just about birds, is it, Nette! It is just wonderful. I will fav it.
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October 6, 2017 at 7:01 PM
P.S. That is a perfect quote at the beginning.
Cozart Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 9:18 AM
This is beautiful.
Sivey Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Your skills at writing an emotional poem is evident within this write! Your imagery is so powerful my friend you can't escape the words without a grand view! I loved this incredible piece this morning, Great Work!!
Williams Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 4:55 AM
A beautiful poem Nette, I see a winner already and a fav...Maria xx
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October 6, 2017 at 4:19 AM
- Enjoy this beautiful poem Nette ... love the end - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Very beautiful nette, as alway! :)
Marty Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 5:36 PM
One thing is for sure-- your depth, expressive language, and literary presence make this poem incomparable!! Fly on!
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Written in creative style--the rhymes work well and the story flies like the birds it depicts--high into the winning zone!
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