Birds Didn't Return Whatever

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"Whatever" Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Suzette Richards

Destiny smiled at her arrogance!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 10:47:00 AM

So clever! Congrats here

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/16/2023 4:12:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Really appreciate your comment.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2023 5:39:00 PM

Dearest Mala, your opening line is intriguing and arouses the heart and imagination to know why "Destiny smiled at her arrogance! A riveting first verse, my sweet friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Suzette's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/16/2023 9:05:00 AM

My dear, sweet friend, I am deeply touched by your kindness and humbled by your words. I cherish your poetry friendship and relish your unique golden pen that shines like no other. Your soulful poetic voice is exquisite and your artistry never fails to amaze and inspire me. May you and yours enjoy a blessed and happy Christmastime.. ~Sue

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/16/2023 6:50:00 AM

Dearest Susan, I am so honoured, with your kindest, sweetest, thoughtful comment! Sometimes I wonder, how am I so fortunate to have gifted as well as compassionate friends like you! Your poems amaze me, and I really wish I had a golden pen like yours! Yes, this contest was quite intriguing - the sponsor is another brilliant poetess! I myself admired this line - probably it came spontaneously - a bit of despair from my own life! Hugs, Sweetest Friend! Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones!