Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Birds At Dusk

Dusk birds in clover
the purple fields of rich song
Gold day was so long
Flying in fragrance, darkly
mingling at evening's soiree

Through sweet green, dimly
on the summer night of nights
as red Mars wanders
Nebulous shapes flit moon hours
Avian verve in flowers

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Michael Tor June 16, 2023 at 2:27 AM Evelyn your poetry is awesome. I love this and I am favoring. Thank you for sharing. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 16, 2023 at 5:58 PM I appreciate your fine complimentary remarks, Michael. Thank you so much.

Yann Rolland June 14, 2023 at 7:14 AM great moment of poetry and reality, we can live the scene , the "paysage" seems great, wonderful penning Evelyn Judy Buehler June 14, 2023 at 12:59 PM Thank you for your valuable comment, Yann.

Shirley Hawkins June 13, 2023 at 5:38 PM Pure poetry, I love the silhouettes. Natures beautiful artistry. I loved this, Evelyn. Thank you. I hope you are having a peaceful day, Take care, Shirley Evelyn Judy Buehler June 13, 2023 at 7:35 PM I had a lovely day, thank you, Shirley. So glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind comments. :)

Joseph P. DiMino June 13, 2023 at 4:25 PM "as red Mars wanders Nebulous shapes flit moon hours Avian verve in flowers" -- entrancing use of language. Wonderful imagery! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 13, 2023 at 7:38 PM Thank you so much for the pleasure of your kind appreciation, my friend. :)

Gershon Wolf June 12, 2023 at 8:22 PM 'Avian verve in flowers,' -- truly a memorable closing to a profound write, Evelyn. Thank you, Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler June 13, 2023 at 8:52 AM Quite welcome. Thank you for the compliment, Gershon. :)

Victor Buhagiar June 12, 2023 at 3:26 AM The sun has disappeared, birds still sing, the sky is colourful in red. All is quiet. Such imagery is indeed beautiful. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 12, 2023 at 11:25 AM Thank you very much for the lovely remarks. I hope your week is a good one. :)

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2023 at 5:23 PM The scene at dusk is strikingly beautiful as your poem conveys, Evelyn. I hear the song of birds and see the sky enchanting. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 11, 2023 at 7:04 PM It's very nice to read your warm remarks. Thanks so much for your appreciation. Have a wonderful week. :)