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Birds and Bees

At church, young niece asked me in a blink What mating meant with a curious wink “It's a bird-and-bee's dream For girls who reach sixteen” Pined she,” that’s not what my classmates think” ---------- Andrea Dietrich's ONE REALLY FUNNY, CORRECTLY METERED LIMERICK

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Kash Poet

Date: 6/10/2012 7:32:00 AM

Very nice Nette !Congrats on your win!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/9/2012 12:01:00 PM

Congrats, nette. Excellent. Cute. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/9/2012 11:53:00 AM

Cute limerick. Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2012 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/9/2012 7:07:00 AM

Nette, congrats on your win...David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/9/2012 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine limerick xx

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/9/2012 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM! Funny... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 12:49:00 AM

YOur limerick is very witty and clever, Nette. If it had the perfect meter I was looking for, it would have scored super high!! Congrats on your win in my contest.

Judy Ball

Date: 2/22/2012 4:14:00 AM

This one is too cute. Often when they ask it's because they have already heard things at school. Good one Nette. God Bless, JB

Don Johnson

Date: 2/22/2012 2:03:00 AM

fiddle de weren't fiddle dum, she knew the facts, of life sweet one, cute write here, yes mum:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/21/2012 9:51:00 PM

oh cool and clevrly crafted with innuendo plus luv sweet Nedtte... good luck in contrst.. they start much younger these days luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 7:20:00 PM

hahaha, VERY clever ending on this cool limerick.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/21/2012 4:58:00 PM

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Russell Sivey

Date: 2/21/2012 4:14:00 PM

ha ha, that is quite funny Nette, "that's not what my classmates think" is a great and humorous line! It's true, when they are young, they have an innocence with their questions, but then you find out...they know more than what you expected! It always seems to happen! This is a wonderful write based on these interesting questions! Great Work!!