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Birdbrains

I passed an iron gate with birds On either side, a’strut. There was a space to squeeze through, Though the gate was mostly shut. The sparrows on the far side Pecked for food along the ground With a pigeon as protector Guarding all the crumbs they’d found. Yet the near side had 2 pigeons Trying hard to breach the gap But for every move they made, the guard Unleashed a little zap. As I watched the scene, I wondered Just how dumb those birds were; why, If they wanted to cross over, All they had to do was fly! (This is my poem from Monday, July 20th)

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Date: 7/23/2020 11:23:00 PM
I asked a pigeon why not fly? / "Too expensive", his reply. Fun poem, ilene! I see you didn't take a day off... most impressive!
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Date: 7/22/2020 5:27:00 PM
Cute one... Perhaps you missed the 'No Fly Zone' sign. lol. Thanks, Ilene! :) gw
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Date: 7/22/2020 9:39:00 AM
This made me chuckle. Mind you... Pigeons are actually smarter than they look ;), xomo!
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John Watt
Date: 7/23/2020 11:21:00 PM
Pigeon lovers of the world, stand up for our feathered friends!
Date: 7/22/2020 7:36:00 AM
lol birdbrains is the perfect title!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2020 7:28:00 AM
Birdbrains lol. Was reading the other day that the humble pigeon is a relative of the T. Rex, how they arrived at that I don't know. Be careful giving them bread lol.
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