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birds gathering here speaking in their foreign tongues gossiping 'bout me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/8/2014 7:00:00 AM
In English slang,birds are young women, if they are speaking..... oops too much imagination!!. Miken
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/8/2014 7:23:00 AM
I think you are the only one who "got" it..Im smiling. Barbara
Date: 11/8/2014 3:11:00 PM
I heard the Jay scold and the Crow cawed back..I think that they were warning about the old woman dressed in black..I enjoyed this one..Sometimes it sounds like they are gossiping..They will scatter now that summer is coming to an end..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:13:00 PM
Where they mocking birds? ;) Funny haiku, very much enjoyed.
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Date: 11/5/2014 5:22:00 PM
ha! nice one, barbara...
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Date: 11/5/2014 4:22:00 PM
Nosy little birds . . . one fly right into my window! loved the haiku.
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Date: 11/5/2014 3:58:00 PM
simply charming Barbara:-) hugs jan xx
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