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Bird

He comes flying in the 'morn high above me dipping and diving. He sings a song, a melody sweet drifting down, touching my heart and soul lifting my spirit. He spins and twirls, whirling in the sunshine, he floats on the breeze with ease. There is no fear of crashing down. Oh yes, I admire his great happiness, strength and his courage I love his filigree feathers fluttering, white and wispy so delicate yet strong. Now he plummets downward and calls my name loudly, come fly today, fly sweet earth girl, and I laugh 'cause I am flying, flying in my mind, oh yes, gliding and falling drifting, twirling whirling down then up high high. __________________________________ November 14, 2018 Poetry/Shape/Bird Copyright Protected, ID 18-1085-093-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Shape sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 12/18/2018 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful write DH..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 12/18/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Anisha, Line, Beata, Jan, Anthony, Anne-Lise, Carolyn and Eve for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:03:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top on your well-deserved poem. Love.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:18:00 PM
Love !
Date: 12/16/2018 12:28:00 PM
Wow awesome shape poem, Constance. Bravo. Congrats on your top win.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
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Date: 12/16/2018 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations! You've presented your courageous free spirit in your poem. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
:-)
Date: 12/15/2018 6:26:00 PM
absolutely stunning Constance!!! you flew to the top with this gem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
Hugs!
Date: 12/15/2018 4:10:00 PM
nicely done heart
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:16:00 PM
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:05:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, D.H. :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:16:00 PM
Hugs!
Date: 12/15/2018 3:00:00 PM
This masterpiece in both substance and form is so deserving of a top win. Congratulations, Dear Heart!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:15:00 PM
:-)
Date: 12/15/2018 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Dear Heart, I thank you for entering my contest Shapes. You bring to the conscious mind the experience and emotion the sight of a bird in a wonderful dance. Your work had feeling and flowed like a waterfall full of energy. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:15:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the contest and for my great placement , appreciate ~
Date: 12/12/2018 4:39:00 AM
JWE thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment, appreciate. This was really hard to do, took lots of tweeks to get it right and hours.
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Date: 12/11/2018 5:20:00 AM
What a great and unique poem!! It looked hard and fun to write. (: Wish I could make poetry as good as this particular one. I will read one more of your poems tonight before bedtime. - JWE
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Constance La France
Date: 12/12/2018 4:38:00 AM
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Date: 11/29/2018 5:50:00 PM
Hi Jack, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, well it did take me ages, so I hope it pays off, that was not easy ~
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Date: 11/29/2018 8:59:00 AM
wow, this is a lovely poem with a very clever shape (this would have taken me absolutely ages, LOL). i loved your new form for your latest contest
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2018 5:49:00 PM
:-)
Date: 11/14/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Mike and Sun for visiting and commenting, SIGH !!! I was sort of worried it was off ~
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Date: 11/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
- A beautiful bird, B.W. ... well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:35:00 AM
Hi Constance, this is such an amazing poem and shape you have created. Your wonderful words bring such peace to this reader. This is an excellent peace and I wish you all the best in the contest for a win. Reads like a winner to me Constance. have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX. A fave
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Date: 11/14/2018 10:58:00 AM
Hi friends, sure hope I got the bird shape right, it was not easy I can tell you that but a wonderful challenge ~
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Date: 11/14/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Sand for visiting ~
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Date: 11/14/2018 9:17:00 AM
beautifully written...
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