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Bird

                                                       He
                                                   comes
                                                 flying
                                   in the 'morn
                             high above me
                       dipping and diving.
                      He sings a song,
                     a melody sweet
                    drifting down,
                   touching my
                heart and soul
               lifting my spirit.
              He spins and twirls,
         whirling in the sunshine,
        he floats on the breeze with ease.
   There is no fear of crashing down.
Oh yes, I admire his great happiness, strength and his courage
    I love his filigree feathers fluttering,
               white and wispy so delicate yet strong. 
                     Now he plummets downward
                          and calls my name loudly,
                             come fly today, fly
                                sweet earth girl,
                                   and I laugh 'cause
                                  I am flying, flying
                                in my mind, oh yes,
                                  gliding and falling
                                    drifting, twirling
                                         whirling down
                                              then up
                                                  high
                                                       high.

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November 14, 2018


Poetry/Shape/Bird
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1085-093-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Shape
sponsor, Eve Roper

First Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2018

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Joseph May Date: 12/18/2018 4:03:00 PM Beautiful write DH..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:21:00 PM Thank you Anisha, Line, Beata, Jan, Anthony, Anne-Lise, Carolyn and Eve for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~ Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 12/17/2018 12:03:00 AM BIG CONGRATS to win top on your well-deserved poem. Love. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:18:00 PM Love !

Line Gauthier Date: 12/16/2018 12:28:00 PM Wow awesome shape poem, Constance. Bravo. Congrats on your top win. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM ~.~

Beata Agustin Date: 12/16/2018 6:18:00 AM Congratulations! You've presented your courageous free spirit in your poem. God bless you. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM :-)

Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2018 6:26:00 PM absolutely stunning Constance!!! you flew to the top with this gem:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM Hugs!

Anthony Biaanco Date: 12/15/2018 4:10:00 PM nicely done heart Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:16:00 PM ~.~

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/15/2018 4:05:00 PM - Congratulations on your great shape poem, D.H. :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:16:00 PM Hugs!

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/15/2018 3:00:00 PM This masterpiece in both substance and form is so deserving of a top win. Congratulations, Dear Heart! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:15:00 PM :-)

Eve Roper Date: 12/15/2018 12:14:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win, Dear Heart, I thank you for entering my contest Shapes. You bring to the conscious mind the experience and emotion the sight of a bird in a wonderful dance. Your work had feeling and flowed like a waterfall full of energy. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/18/2018 2:15:00 PM Eve, thank you for the contest and for my great placement , appreciate ~

Constance La France Date: 12/12/2018 4:39:00 AM JWE thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment, appreciate. This was really hard to do, took lots of tweeks to get it right and hours. Login to Reply

J.W. Earnings Date: 12/11/2018 5:20:00 AM What a great and unique poem!! It looked hard and fun to write. (: Wish I could make poetry as good as this particular one. I will read one more of your poems tonight before bedtime. - JWE Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/12/2018 4:38:00 AM ~.~

Constance La France Date: 11/29/2018 5:50:00 PM Hi Jack, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, well it did take me ages, so I hope it pays off, that was not easy ~ Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/29/2018 8:59:00 AM wow, this is a lovely poem with a very clever shape (this would have taken me absolutely ages, LOL). i loved your new form for your latest contest Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 11/29/2018 5:49:00 PM :-)

Constance La France Date: 11/14/2018 2:36:00 PM Thank you Mike and Sun for visiting and commenting, SIGH !!! I was sort of worried it was off ~ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2018 1:16:00 PM - A beautiful bird, B.W. ... well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/14/2018 11:35:00 AM Hi Constance, this is such an amazing poem and shape you have created. Your wonderful words bring such peace to this reader. This is an excellent peace and I wish you all the best in the contest for a win. Reads like a winner to me Constance. have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX. A fave Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/14/2018 10:58:00 AM Hi friends, sure hope I got the bird shape right, it was not easy I can tell you that but a wonderful challenge ~ Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/14/2018 9:44:00 AM Thank you Sand for visiting ~ Login to Reply

Sand Blown Date: 11/14/2018 9:17:00 AM beautifully written... Login to Reply