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Bipolar Bubble

Bipolar Bubble At a recent family gathering Friends and family ask cheerfully How are you feeling today? Not too bad…my mouth says I put a smile on my face As I simply walk away They don’t know I didn’t sleep last night As well as the four nights before When I am manic I can’t sleep at night When depressed I sleep all day I live in a bipolar bubble of life Too high then so low Takes a toll on me Don’t know which way it will go I don’t always get my way I suffer thru another day This is bipolar my life every day If I told them just a part of what goes on They would be startled by my reply They can’t process the pain I am in I’m crying in the hall way Someone walks by Wanting to comfort me Don’t cry it will get better... I’m not crying I say Those are not tears you see It’s my brain fluid leaking out of my eyes What more could I say?

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Date: 1/31/2018 4:49:00 PM
What an amazing first post, I think many will be able to relate to this, especially on here... You write very well and this is an important subject... Welcome to poetry soup Patricia..
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 1/31/2018 9:10:00 PM
A lot of my inspirations come from my life. I hope this can help those who need it..
Date: 1/20/2018 9:50:00 AM
Wow Patricia, an incredibly affecting pen. Hugs to you. Thank you for sharing this piece of yourself. xomo
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:34:00 AM
Patricia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 1/19/2018 12:42:00 PM
Truly what I need..a marvelous community. Glad to meet you! Patty
Date: 1/17/2018 5:16:00 AM
What a delightfully written poem. Extremely endearing and charming, Patricia. I can relate.
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Date: 1/16/2018 8:34:00 AM
I thought I would start at the beginning...I usually find it is the best place to begin. I really got pulled "right in" with this poem of yours, Patricia -- it makes a powerful impact! My best regards. :) john P.s Welcome to the great "Soup"! :)
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:31:00 PM
Understand the feeling. People see us as we want and not as we are.
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