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Bilocation Poetry Contest 

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*                                                                         
                                                                 *
                                                             *
                                                  Dancing on clouds 
                                                  of fleecy white
                                                  Renouncing all things *
                                                  anchors that bind *
                                                  In silence I muse *
                                                *on her tonight
                                                  In my arms
                                                  where I find
                                                  her loving-kindness *
                                                  lavender scents
                                                  soft honey lips *
                                                  argan essence
                                                  My mind swirls in
                                                  her rose perfume *
                                                  Winding gold locks*
                                               * Champagne sips
                                                  Effervescence 
                                                  A space where time doesn’t 
                                                  exist, no tic or tocks *
                                               * True love   *
                                                  seeks nothing     *
                                                  Peeling away the veneer 
                                                  of identity   *
                                                  keeping * only love-joy
                                                  Pure bliss *
                                                  Imagination likely                                                                                                                  
                                                  How can I dismiss *
                                                  the taste of strawberry
                                                  A surgery kiss*
                                             *   as real as*
                                                  I stand here
                                                  In my arms     *
                                                  my sweet chéri*
                                                  Her warm charms
                                               * will keep in my      *
                                                  m e m o r y
                                             *
                                                                   *
                                                        *

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Date: 2/15/2024 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2024 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Richard!
Date: 2/15/2024 8:21:00 PM
Think you'll pass eh ?? You sure did pass, right into the winner's circle. Great poem Anaya. Congrats.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2024 8:39:00 AM
Oh my God! I'm surprised & ecstatic that I made the list!!!! Thank you, Wen :D
Date: 2/14/2024 6:30:00 PM
As Don Quixote remarked, too much sanity makes us insane, thus I think we all need bilocation, as long as it doesn't fall into dislocation. Very romantic. The graphic design works swimmingly for a Valentine's display. Happy Valentines Day, Anaya!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2024 7:28:00 PM
One sentence sums it up as usual, R.G. Thank you, Happy Valentine's Day, Robert!
Date: 2/14/2024 12:43:00 PM
Savor that moment Anaya, they certainly don’t come around too often, (A surgery kiss) stand out line for me, but wait! I’m guessing from the picture, and ending he’s perhaps reminiscing on a lost love! or wishing he was somewhere else in time, Bilocation makes perfect sense here, love the direction you take for this difficult contest, best of luck, cheers David
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2024 7:26:00 PM
I was thinking of "Sugar Kisses" from Echo & The Bunnymen ha. I thought of everything I'd like a man to be, and I became him. Either one I think will qualify. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
Date: 2/14/2024 10:17:00 AM
Your artwork is incredibly diverse and skillfully executed. The eloquence with which you have penned this piece is truly remarkable. The intricacy and multifaceted thoughts I found the choice of words and the unique construction of your poem quite delightful. Of particular note, the phrase "champagne sips" beautifully captures the effervescence and ethereal quality that memories often possess. I wish you the utmost success in the contest.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2024 10:25:00 AM
Delighted that you enjoyed it on this day of love, sweet SP. Thank you & Happy Valentines Day!
Date: 2/13/2024 11:18:00 PM
A very romantic poem.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2024 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, romantic master, you have christened my attempt , thank you. Happy Valentines Day!
Date: 2/13/2024 3:16:00 PM
Written from a male pov? In any case, very romantic Anaya
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/13/2024 4:06:00 PM
Gotcha. I'm not too deep.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/13/2024 3:35:00 PM
So the concept is bilocation, the phenomenon is that you are in two places at the same time, I'm not great at romantic poems, so I did it from his perspective, yes. You see, in the end he is dancing with himself while his mind is in the clouds. :)
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