Billy's Autism

Autistic blank gaze Graces the spaces of mind Rainbow's grace bestows Dark forest gives way to trees A smile colors blank spaces ................. Contest: Forest Lights Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire
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December 24, 2012 at 8:19 PM
John, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
Mindova Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Hello. It's important problem you write. Soon I teach so children.
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November 21, 2012 at 8:55 PM
John,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Ellison Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Carol Eastman suggested I take a look at some of your work... I'm glad she did! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Jack
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 10:06 PM
Very interesting way to do this contest, john. Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Wonderful take on this theme. Congrats on your big win. BG
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Moses. Love, Carol
Bauer Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 3:37 PM
a very interesting take on the "forest lights" theme and a well-deserved win! congrats!
Wesley Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:47 AM
You describe this complex condition so with such intimacy; wonder if you have dealt with anyone afflicted. My friend's daughter has it from an infected innoculation given in childhood. So sad.
Freeman Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Yes, I dealt wit it daily from 2007-2013 I drove a challenged school bus for Dover Ar. school district. Agape, Moses
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, John! It's wonderful and insightful. Blessings and love, Rhonda
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:06 PM
You saw this challenge so differently and acutely. Congratulations on your win, John. Love, Joyce
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Hurray for your win John !!!! Well done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:41 PM
congrats John, wow a brilliant winner here. harry
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Good one that was destined to win..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
Song Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 1:47 PM
7777777777777777!!!!!! You know there once was a day that you wrote for so many contests..I always loved reading your unique angle on a vast array of topics...This is simply awesome!...My eldest child works with autistic children and often I join him with his patients for lunch or to go for a stroll at the park...God's heart has these kids right in the very middle! Congrats, Moses! Smmmoooooocheeeese! Gwendolen
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 12:24 PM
John congrats on your win..David
Grisetti Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on yur wonderful poem receiving first place.
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Alexa and I were stunned by the depth of meaning in this poem -- comparing the scene to the images a child with autism has. Bravo for a first-place win, John! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:30 AM
wow, a deep write that celebrates all kinds of people whatever their station in life is, moe... sublime!.. best winning huggs!..:)
K Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Love your word choices! a sad reality, but never makes them less of a person :)
Horne Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 11:10 AM
touching tender write, John
Wesley Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:11 AM
Such a sad state and it manifests itself differently in each who has it. My friend's daughter got it after an infected innoculation when very young. You handled this so well John, with delicacy.
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Soup mail, John.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 10:12 PM
this is very nice, making me think of a young boy's "seeing" despite his handicap.
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